#69 is a nice improvement, although I think "Martial Arts Centre" should be right-side up—It can still curve around the bottom, just flip it so that you don't have to read it upside down.
Regarding your new ones, we don't mind that "Martial Arts Centre" wraps around the bottom part, just that it's right side up. It would probably look better if it wraps, to be honest.
I like your sensibility. Do you think you could try some more powerful colours? Red and black maybe? We recommended avoiding red and black in our brief but we'd like to see it now.