68 and 69 have interesting clever concept with graphic combining object concepts of brain, tree, network -- added to ranked list -- variations with graphic more in proportion to name? size/space consumed by graphic as large or larger than name?
your design concept still holding onto top rank; what about reducing size of "Brain" and "Health" on either side of trunk of tree and increasing size of "Alliance" as ground base under tree? what about roots of tree going between some of letters of "Alliance" as ground base? the brain-tree-network graphic is still somewhat too large compared to size of name Brain Health Alliance; still need the graphic to be more important in size focus and attention to capture viewer's eye; it should be primary with the words of the name secondayr
can you try variations that combine elements from 219 and 218? the layout of the word name Brain Health Alliance with the trunk and roots from 218 with the blue colored brain from 219? but the blue colored brain will need more of a gradient in the blue color to allow for greater contrast with detailed elements inside the brain? also variations combining some of the branching roots that extend in between any of the letters of the word Alliance?
also while we like the neuron/node and link detail elements inside the brain, probably better not to have such a single large neuron in the center of the brain; it is good to have different neurons of different sizes, but not a single one in the center that is so much larger than the others
almost there but not quite yet so let's try to finalize with a variation that we can declare the winner; your new variations 220 to 223 have reduced the size of the center neuron and improved the contrast of the blue gradient to better see details inside the brain and that's all great, thank you; however, the overall proportion size and weight of brain-tree graphic to words of name is still much better in 219 which is still in rank #1 because the brain in 220-223 has become too small relative to words of name; what ratio of height and weight of brain compared to height and weight of words of name looks best???; again we believe that the picture graphic of the brain tree should draw the attention and focus of the viewer's eye and not the words of the name of the organization; meanwhile having such a dark trunk of the tree in 220 to 223 draws too much attention to the trunk when the attention and focus should still be on the brain-tree itself rather than trunk of the tree; so none of the variants 220 to 223 can replace 219 which retains rank #1; better to have a more open light colored trunk with outline more like in 218, so blue brain-tree gradient should go from blue to white background in trunk of tree with dark blue outline of trunk as in 218 with some additional link line(s) - one or two perhaps - in center of trunk going to some tree roots as in 220 but without the solid dark color of the trunk;
for final version of logo, please use "transparent" background and check the logo for appearance against off-white, very light gray or very light blue background colors; thank you
Thank you for the feedback. Here is the revised file #224 according to your suggestions. Entries #226 #227 #228 as with the backgrounds which you requested. If you have any suggestions or changes let me know.
Ok, thanks, we have moved #224 to rank #1 in place of #219; the color scheme now looks like it will be great on any white, off white, light gray or light blue background; but the transition in the blue to white gradient in the trunk of the tree is too abrupt when it should be more gradual; also the spacing of the BHA name words around the trunk of the tree is too tight and too crowded without any of the more elegant spacing and proportions used in 218; so can you take the more elegant size and spacing of the tree trunk and the words "Brain", "Health" and "Alliance" around the tree trunk from 218 and use them in 224? essentially we need to combine the top half of 224 with the bottom half of 218 while keeping the color scheme of 224
Thank you for the revisions in 231 and 232; however it still does not have the same appearance spacing and proportions as the bottom half of 218; we believe that is because the font size of the word Alliance is smaller than the font size of the words Brain and Health; in contrast, in the bottom half of 218 the font size appears to be the same for all 3 words; so can you please make the font size the same for all 3 words in 231 and 232?
Actually the font size of Alliance is little smaller then brain and health in #218 but it looks the same because of single color. Now in new entries #233 #234 all the font size are same.