Thanks
Can we try this one with a horizontal line between the 2 lines of text. Can you do one with a thinner line and and one normal (same horizontal lines you used in the 2 previous options)
Also an earlier logo you did with the blue figure with a ribbon and a blue star overlapping the head. The blue coloured text you used for chiropractic can you try that blue colour for the dots and chiropractic as well.
(Ps if you remove logos then it can make it hard to refer to the elements I liked)
That's a better position of the coloured dots. Could you do the dots in the same blue as the lighter dots on #338 has the contrast in blues stands out better
Hi sorry for all the delays we have a electricity repair at my zone and we were out of power for many hours we just got stable power and all is back to normal sorry for all the delays :)
Could you try this version with dots all in blueberry? Maybe you make 1 dot or the 3 dots in a triangle to the left of centre a different colour (grey or a bright colour)
Sorry, not those 4 dots. The lower dot you coloured is correct. The other 3 dots are immediately below this lower dot rather than above. Sorry it is hard to explain in message
Still wanting to work this logo a bit more. Not sure if you need another couple of dots, or to remove a few of the connecting lines from around the edges or if a few dots might be better as different colours like the 2 orange ones on the left side. Is there anything you can do to make the image hold its presence better
Can you try a version of this where the 4 dots that are grouped slightly off centre (up and right) are in ocean blue - can you see which 4 dots I mean?
The difference of this shinier version seems only slight on iPad. Do you think it improves the look or do you think the non shiney version works better?
Are you able to offer a version where the circle isn't as thick or a little less heavy. YOu could either make it thinner or have 2 circle - an outter blueberry circle which is thick and a thin inside circle which is silver like the chiropractic
I did not understand what you said. Your saying grey colour is dull - is that good or bad?
Are you saying the the ocean blue takes the prominence off the B&B
looks nice in colour, just not quite sold on logo. Could you show the option with the health performance sleep in blueberry with the horizontal line (previous design style)
That a nice concept, but not with this colour. Could you try this concept with the blueberry colour (dark and light versions) and blue (dark and light). Thanks
This honeycome a bit heavy - circle to heavy - needs to be thinner or to have a double circle - one thick, one thin. You might also like to add an extra ring of honeycomes to make them smaller
Silver Grey should be ok to show the subtle color for Chiro if you add a color like bright then the Brain and Body will be dissappear.
aslo note adding a color to chiro aslo can have a luxury look too.
Hi shihara, are you bale to keep working on this design to get me closer to what I am after?
You might like to try an option where the dots are blueberry with thin connecting lines and make 1 or 2 of the dots have colour that matches the colour of chiropractic - try ocean blue?
YOu might even like to try an option where the dots are blueberry with thin connecting lines and make 1 or 2 of the dots have colour that matches the colour of chiropractic - try ocean blue?
Not a fan of the B
like the text layout
grey/silver - a possibility but would prefer a different colour - one that also doesnt take away from Braina nd Body being taken in first
Colour is good except that it makes chiropractic stand out more or equal to Body & Brain. Need a colour for Chiropractic that is visible, but doesnt detract away from Brain & Body first. The ocean blue is one colour, are there any others.
I do like the set out of the text though, so keep that. just need to work on the logo inside the solid circle - something relevant, not just a picture filler
prefer the ocean blue over this green colour. Still really like the solid circle logo, but not the logo inside - just doesn't represent my business - sorry
Can we try the dots in ocean green and can you make the weight of the outline of the dots and connectors much lighter. We need to make it look a bit softer
I think its just a bit fancy - logo needs to be easily recogniseable/memorable - keep logo simple. I am still interested in further options inside the contained circle you are providing
not a fan of a square logo. a circle shape relates to wholeness and a complete approach. My service allows me to practice like a detective, turning over every stone to find the root cause of a patients problem
Too much like a sun, I much prefer a logo with a solid circle and logo confined inside. If there is no confinement the logo has to have some meaning/be related to my service
I want the Body & Brain text to stand out first which it does. i think certain colurs cause the chiropractic to stand out first (like the purple or red). What do you think?
This logo is luxury classy simple of two letter B's facing each other there is a person up for mean brain person down to mean sleep. This logo i just mage very much simple as possible yet the elegant and the luxury feel to be maintained.
Having another colour for chiropractic really does make it stand out. Just not sure that turquoise is the colour. What other colours are considered classy/premium service/luxury?
If you made the & smaller would this allow you to bring the words Brain Body closer together. That way you wouldnt need to stretch space out the letters of Chiropractic as much (ie the text would be a bit more compact. What do you think?
If you made the & smaller would this allow you to bring the words Brain Body closer together. That way you wouldnt need to stretch space out the letters of Chiropractic as much (ie the text would be a bit more compact. What do you think?
some other ideas for you to consider
This font style just stands out immediately
Maybe if you made the & smaller and braught the words closer then you would not have such a large gap to fill with Chiropractic - thus you could make the font size of chiropractic smaller without having to space out the letters so much, or try chiropractic in a less bold font
Thanks for posting a different idea. I do not like the double figure image very much - getting too busy and large and this kind of figure is rampant in so many body workers (chiro, physio, osteo etc) logos.
Also do not like the font style of the &
You have however been able to make all three lines of text not look too cluttered and easy to read
This is the improvised version, i actually sketched my book with health, performance and sleep. the Joy you see in the people are to represent health/performance, the wave around the hip is performance/sleep
Yup black is always has a elegant side to it :) in the design industry if a design works well in black or white then it is considered to be good in colored as well, you go it right!
What you have going for you Shihara is that you are most keeping to the design brief of simple, modern, elegant, luxury - however we are not there yet ;) keep going please!!
This is a simple and clean logo. Just not sure about the image inside. Like how it has the ability for reversal with white text on background colour like #27
FYI
My practice is not really about mind and body. The brain part is not about the mind, it is about how the brain controls posture, balance and movement. Hope that clarifies
Used a different font and Emerald Green, Since this green is internationally recognized and has a value on it. not that blues dont have its just my thought to add little value on the design i make so even the colors will have a special reason :)
This i designed after visiting your sister page, i made two face to show mind and body since cannot really make a body image into that for a better preview i will upload a bigger version of the logo in a sec
I do not want to copy or have it too similar, as it is a separate business, but it was to help you appreciate that these 2 businesses would be working side by side and that the logo for Brain & Body Chiropractic shouldn't be worlds apart.
I guess it just depends what works best. I am flexible. For the text - no gradient is probably better as it is clearer. With the image, I guess it depends what works best. Possibly no gradient will give me a cleaner simpler logo, but I am not averse to a gradient
Also i have a question regarding color, the person in the above design is gradient color and the color i have used on the Chiropractic is flat color (no gradients) which one works best for you? with gradients or non gradients?
I think I prefer the use of & or + instead of the word and as it helps keeps the focus on the words Brain Body. Blue or green in the logo is good, however the blue text for Chiropractic stand out better.
With regards to the logo, I do not dislike it, but I am not in love with it. I think you are moving in the right direction - simple - one image that encapsulates it all. I like the blue sun component and ribbon/ upper portion of the figure, not so much the legs
I like the green logo because of the way you encapsulated it in the circle and the style. Bring some of this to this logo. Help make this blue logo more succinct
You might like to consider a logo/image that is more abstract (like the last one with the circle). Rather than a picture of a brain or body, go for something that creates emotion or makes someone want to engage with my business. Part of that will be the style you bring and part will be what you actually create. I liked the style of the last submission with the green circle, I just wasn't interested in a tree. Hope that helps
My practice isn't just about the brain, so having a logo that is a brain or just a brain is unlikely to work for me. The brain component relates to the chiropractic/functional neurology of what I do - this only makes up 50% of what I do.
Part of what makes me different to other chiropractors is my focus on sleep. You might like to include the health / performance / sleep component under chiropractic - as shown in the uploaded info on file
I would keep the Brain & Body colour the same. Do not like this shade of green. Not a fan of the style of the brain image, prefer the style of the one with the circle image
HI Shihara, how would you describe your green logo style so that I know what kind of style that is. To me it seems simple, modern, funky? How would you describe it?
Better than the last one - much cleaner. Somehow I think the AND takes away from the words Brain Body.
I do like the idea of a circle or semi-complete circle encapsulating the logo, but do not feel a tree represents my business.
I feel like we have taken a step backwards regarding colour and simplicity. Yes text is bolder, but logo is much less elegant. You are still using leaves and making it seem like a spine which unfortunately does not interest me. If you are going to use bold text like this, then you should replace AND with + or & sign
HI Shihara, thanks for your submission. Is this an image of a flower? It is quite feminine. Sorry for any confusion, I did clarify in the discussion section
Thank you for your submission. I do like your simple approach. I would prefer the text to be a stronger/bolder - feels a bit weak. I mentioned in the discussion part that any logo with a spine (or metaphorical spine) would likely not interest me as I am trying to differentiate my services from typical chiropractic services. Also too feminine
Please provide feedback on individual designs so i can understand you as i upload designs :) the best logos come out when client provide feedbacks on the designs :)
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I have uploaded the changes :)
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Also, are the dots between health performance sleep meant to light blue?
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Could you also make the & unbolded
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Can we try this one with a horizontal line between the 2 lines of text. Can you do one with a thinner line and and one normal (same horizontal lines you used in the 2 previous options)
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A few comments were suggested to improve this design
A) Could you unbold the &
B) could you try place the logo to the left of the text (it would need to be smaller obviously)
Could you do this for #335 and #299
Much thanks
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In the finalist phase as admin was very slow to reply to my extension. Thank you for your patience
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(Ps if you remove logos then it can make it hard to refer to the elements I liked)
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Could you also try the & unbolded?
Much thanks
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Chiropractic would be in the green colour of the dots here
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Chiropractic would be in the lighter blue of the dots here
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Thanks :)
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any future revisions lets use the previous health performance sleep in blueberry with the horizontal line
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Are you saying the the ocean blue takes the prominence off the B&B
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I think grey works well on this
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Also what do youthink works best for the health performance sleep. white text or blue black?
Great to have your opinion
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Where you going to do ocean blue for the chiropractic?
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Could you do a version of this where the health performance sleep is white text on blueberry background
obviously you would not need the horizontal line for that
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What if you write health performance sleep in white text on a background same colour as brain & body text colour
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Anyway it looks better.
Could you try a version that is multicoloured with a variety of bright colours?
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a) make a small group of dots the same colour as chiropractic.
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b) make the balls multicoloured - bright
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As a different idea, you could create a honeycomb - lots of connected hexagon inside the circle
Or
Still use dots but not in the image of a brain - something more ordered with connectors.
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aslo note adding a color to chiro aslo can have a luxury look too.
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You might like to try an option where the dots are blueberry with thin connecting lines and make 1 or 2 of the dots have colour that matches the colour of chiropractic - try ocean blue?
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Additionally, you might like to consider a different colour for the circle that match chiropractic - ocean blue?
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text layout is good
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like the text layout
grey/silver - a possibility but would prefer a different colour - one that also doesnt take away from Braina nd Body being taken in first
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I do like the set out of the text though, so keep that. just need to work on the logo inside the solid circle - something relevant, not just a picture filler
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Again like the solid circle, but the logo inside doesn't feel right - seems better for a psychology business
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I want the Body & Brain text to stand out first which it does. i think certain colurs cause the chiropractic to stand out first (like the purple or red). What do you think?
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Also not a fan of gold colour, maybe try a shade of purple
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I have uploaded few other designs please check and let me know if you need any changes
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Also I would go back to the & in blue black (not in white)
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I think sometimes plain black (although it can be elegant) sometimes actually looks quite plain.
The blue/black (blueberry) colour gives it a nice twist :)
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This font style just stands out immediately
Maybe if you made the & smaller and braught the words closer then you would not have such a large gap to fill with Chiropractic - thus you could make the font size of chiropractic smaller without having to space out the letters so much, or try chiropractic in a less bold font
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The image is just too large and I commented on this no the other versions.
Possibly I wuold make Chiropractic font a little smaller so that Brain & Body draws the eye to it first
thanks for your submissions :)
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Not such a fan of this font style, prefer your other blocked fonts that you have used
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Also do not like the font style of the &
You have however been able to make all three lines of text not look too cluttered and easy to read
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I like the thickness of the circle, but not so much the image inside. What is it mean't to represent?
Happy for further submissions of this and #29 but with s different symbol or image inside the circle
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Again grey text feels a bit invisible
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My practice is not really about mind and body. The brain part is not about the mind, it is about how the brain controls posture, balance and movement. Hope that clarifies
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health / performance / sleep ?
These 3 things are what we achieve by treating brain and body. The sleep part is a differentiator for my brand
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With regards to the logo, I do not dislike it, but I am not in love with it. I think you are moving in the right direction - simple - one image that encapsulates it all. I like the blue sun component and ribbon/ upper portion of the figure, not so much the legs
I like the green logo because of the way you encapsulated it in the circle and the style. Bring some of this to this logo. Help make this blue logo more succinct
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I do like the idea of a circle or semi-complete circle encapsulating the logo, but do not feel a tree represents my business.
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