My apologies, I did not see that you had done it. Great!
Could you do an option without the vertical line. Do you think the size of the brain is too big for the text? Feel free to modify the brain size to suit the text. Thanks
Jonathan
I suspect the logo would look a little different in high resolution, could you try a slightly less dark (blue/black) colour for the text as it still seems quite close to black? #367, #368
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Hi Jonny did you see the message above? Can you make the blue/black text darker so there is better contrast between the text and light blue dots
Thank you
This one looks ok, just not sure about the gold/yellow triangle. Can you try a different colour for that triangle? Not red or white either. Much the thanks
Hi Jonny, thanks so much for your revisions and opinion. I think the text colour would look even better if you make the text colour darker (darker blue/black or dark navy) due to better contrast with the blue image. What do you think?
Thanks
Jonny
Hi Jonny, thanks so much for your revisions and opinion. I think the text colour would look even better if you make the text colour darker (darker blue/black or dark navy) due to better contrast with the blue image. What do you think?
Thanks
Jonny
I will sleep now. But i will be back tomorrow. During the day i will be at work, but when i arrive home i will have more to work on revision in case you need. So feel free to ask as always.
Done revisions as you suggest. And it looks better.
To be sincere. i´m starting to like more the blue one #364. And thats the text disposition that looks more balanced to me. The other is also good and simple. But overall i like this one the best #364.
If you need anything else just let me know Jonny79, feel free.
Could you try an option for #352 and # 360 where the text colour is a bit darker. Maybe go for a blueberry or bluey/black colour as the grey seems a bit lost. Much thanks
Please check revision done for your appreciation and let me know what do you think: #360
About the designs i like more i will leave bellow the number: #351 / #361
The colours are the more balanced i think. On #360 it have one of the triangle in the middle in blue, making the connection with the blue circles also.
Anything else you may need just let me know. Feel free Jonny79.
Hi Jonny could you do a version of this like #351 where health performance sleep is under the width of brain & body.
Thank you for your quick responses
Could you also offer a few variation of colour changes.
Maybe one in that is
Uniform blue colour like the dots with white borders of each of the triangles
Some others where you just shift around the multi colours just to see what other variations in multi colours gives - the light blue train angles need to be positioned so that it works with the blue dot of the "i" . Are you able to follow my descriptions?
Can you try a version where the brain image is a bit larger. You might like to fit health performance sleep within the same width dimension as body&brain.
I have extended the finalist phase as there is still some fine tuning to do with 2 or 3 logos. I am waiting for management to approve this as it is a weekend.
Thanks Jonny.
I think what made the circle logo so appealing was that the triangles were assymetricsk and not all the same size and were not ordered. Can you try do one in the same style as the circle.
If you need to make the brain bigger you can do the layout so the health performance sleep text doesn't extend underneath the brain
Much thanks
Looking very forward to your design
I can appreciate what your saying, but I'm asking you, not you copying. All designers have produced a brain of some sort during this process, so why can't you?
I do have the word brain in my business name, so it should be acceptable that all designers might submit a logo with a brain.
I didn´t submit brain, to avoid conflits with other designers, because i didn´t submited, and we have some rules here on Logotournament to follow. But i worked some great alternatives, i think. Please check them and let me know what do you think.
If you need anything else feel free to ask.
Btw as an apart from this, people call me jonny here. My name is "João" same as John in english.
ONe of the reasons I like this coloured image is it is a circle and it's like pieces of a puzzle which is the way I look at a patient when they have lots of pieces of their puzzle that need to be address to get well
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Thanks for your reply.
In this phase only 1st ranked designer can submit designs.
Here in Portugal is almost 1 pm. I´m at work right now.
But at night, when i arrive home i can work on that change for you if needed.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Divider line between brain and text
Much thanks
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I´ve submited already.
Feel free to ask if you need anything more.
Kindly Regards,
João
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With and without the vertical divider line
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Yes i like more this colour the other with the darker blue is also good. But i think i am leaning more to this Jonathan.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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The brain size i think is perfect. This is the more balanced believe me.
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Please check this one #387. The size is great. I´ve tried smaller and bigger, but this is the one that look best do not worrie.
Feel free to ask if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Could you do an option without the vertical line. Do you think the size of the brain is too big for the text? Feel free to modify the brain size to suit the text. Thanks
Jonathan
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I asked if you could do a revision of this and remove health performance and sleep from the text. Did you see that message?
Thanks
Jonathan
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Thanks for all the feedback.
Sorry about that, i´m maybe tired lattely because of work. I´ve done that revisions yesterday, forgot to submit. Done it already.
Anything else you may need feel free to ask.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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could you please try this option without the health performance sleep text.
Can you do one with a vertical
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could you please try this option without the health performance sleep text.
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Thanks for all your feedback.
Sorry for the late reply. I´ve arrive some minutes ago from work.
Yes i like this one the best.
Please check revisions done for your consideration and let me know what do you think.
If you need anything else just let me know. Feel free.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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could you please try this option without the health performance sleep text.
Can you do one with a vertical
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could you please try this option without the health performance sleep text.
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Thanks for all your comments.
I´ve missed your other comment for some reason. Sorry for that.
Please check revisions for your appreciation. I think darker blue, looks better and contrast better yes. Even better them black i think.
About that question above. I ike more the #365. The others look balance, but this is better imo.
Feel free to ask if you need anything more dear Jonny79.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for your suggestions.
Sorry for the late reply. I had to do extra hours at work, i´ve arrive 1 hour ago home.
Please check revisions done for your appreciation and let me know what do you think of them.
Anything else you may need feel free to ask please.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Just a quick feedback in case you reply.
I will sleep now. But i will be back tomorrow. During the day i will be at work, but when i arrive home i will have more to work on revision in case you need. So feel free to ask as always.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for all your great feedback.
Done revisions as you suggest. And it looks better.
To be sincere. i´m starting to like more the blue one #364. And thats the text disposition that looks more balanced to me. The other is also good and simple. But overall i like this one the best #364.
If you need anything else just let me know Jonny79, feel free.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks again for your feedback.
Please check revision done for your appreciation and let me know what do you think: #360
About the designs i like more i will leave bellow the number:
#351 / #361
The colours are the more balanced i think. On #360 it have one of the triangle in the middle in blue, making the connection with the blue circles also.
Anything else you may need just let me know. Feel free Jonny79.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for the suggestions
I was sleeping. Please check revisions for your appreciation and let me know what do you think of them.
I will probably have to leave home, but i will be back again at night and can give you more variations if needed. Feel free to ask as always.
Wish you good luck with the surveys.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Could you also offer a few variation of colour changes.
Maybe one in that is
Uniform blue colour like the dots with white borders of each of the triangles
Some others where you just shift around the multi colours just to see what other variations in multi colours gives - the light blue train angles need to be positioned so that it works with the blue dot of the "i" . Are you able to follow my descriptions?
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I have extended the finalist phase as there is still some fine tuning to do with 2 or 3 logos. I am waiting for management to approve this as it is a weekend.
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Again thanks very much for the great feedback.
I´ve done revisions so you can considerate. Please check them and let me know what do you think.
Feel free as always to ask if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I think what made the circle logo so appealing was that the triangles were assymetricsk and not all the same size and were not ordered. Can you try do one in the same style as the circle.
If you need to make the brain bigger you can do the layout so the health performance sleep text doesn't extend underneath the brain
Much thanks
Looking very forward to your design
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I will have to leave home in few minutes, but i will be back again at night dear Jonny.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for all your great feedback.
I´ve submited a brain ideia for your appreciation.
Let me know what do you think.
If i can think in something better during this day i will submit at night. So far i think this is probably the best.
Feel free to ask if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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Still really want you to try a brain logo!!!!
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I do have the word brain in my business name, so it should be acceptable that all designers might submit a logo with a brain.
I appreciate your integrity
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can you revise the word chiropractic so it does not interfer with the "y" like you did in #193
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Why did you decide to extend the yellow piece of the puzzle? What was the thinking behind this?
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can you do a brain rather than a lightbulb?
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Thanks for the feedback.
I didn´t submit brain, to avoid conflits with other designers, because i didn´t submited, and we have some rules here on Logotournament to follow. But i worked some great alternatives, i think. Please check them and let me know what do you think.
If you need anything else feel free to ask.
Btw as an apart from this, people call me jonny here. My name is "João" same as John in english.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Also I think the chiropractic interferes with the y from body. Let's revert back to writing chiropractic the previous way
Thanks. Look forward to your revision
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Sorry for the delay. On this one i´ve put the word "chiropractic" on the full length.
Yes i have some ideias in mind. But i´m at work right now, when i arrive home at night i will work some for your appreciation do not worrie.
This is my timezone btw: https://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto
Feel free to ask if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Any other ideas for the logo?
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Done revision for your consideration, please check it and let me know what do you think.
Anything else you may need just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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is there a way to have chiropractic written across the whole way or does the "y" in body prevent this?
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you could try this one with the blue dot
is there a way to have chiropractic written across the whole way or does the "y" in body prevent this?
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Thank you very much for your great feedback.
Please check revisions done for your appreciation and let me know what do you think.
I´ve explored other concepts so you can consider.
Feel free to ask if you need any changes please.
Your feedback is always welcome.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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How would you add health/performance/sleep to the logo?
Like the coloured circle image, but not the hand. Not sure if the circle image on its own would be enough. Lets work on this concept :)
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no trees or leaves
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no trees or leaves
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keep the logo simple
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