The 3rd line is cleare, but with 3 lines it does seem a bit cluttered in this font/design.
Don't think the vertical line separating logo and text adds very much .
I think a horizontal line between the 1st and 2nd lines would help give some better separation. What do you think?
I think the 3rd line of added text is a bit hard to read - doesn't feel very clear and makes the rest of the text too busy. Need to review the sizing of text here. Possibly the horizontal line would look better between brain + body and chiropractic. With eiethr vertical lines or stars (as you have) separating the health performance sleep aspects
I mentioned that I like the semi -circle of the logo, but was hoping you would consider something a little simpler and cleaner within the image that is less busy
Best of the bunch, the moon shape is probably what helps make the logo. I can see that the figures represent adult and child on 2 halves of the brain. Still probably a bit complex.
Not averse to a brain logo, but it really only encapsulates part of the business and might not really be all that obvious to general public it is a brain
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Don't think the vertical line separating logo and text adds very much .
I think a horizontal line between the 1st and 2nd lines would help give some better separation. What do you think?
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For more simpler image please check #49 #50 #51.
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I mentioned that I like the semi -circle of the logo, but was hoping you would consider something a little simpler and cleaner within the image that is less busy
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Thanks for feedback. I added health / performance / sleep below chiropractic. Please check #46. How about this one?
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Cleo
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