nice work, km. both entries look great. the font is awesome for entry 42 and the color scheme is very dynamic. but i really like your entry number 10. it's quite unique and gives a very classy look for the company.
not sure if you've done so already or even care to, but i'd like to suggest adding a little yellow or orange to it like your other entry 42 here. the blue paper on top is very good, but it kind of gives an impression that Bradner may be an architecture firm or blueprint related business. i think it would look awesome with white paper blue lines printed on it and maybe blue as a background or something.
anyway, just an idea - i like your design so much and see so much potential for the client's use, i just had to comment!
I like both of these, but management doesn't want the "Smith" name to be lesser. If you're interested, maybe you could equally weight both "Bradner" and "Smith". Very nice clean work.
No problem! I have uploaded two new versions for your review. The "Smith" and "Bradner" are the same size and to keep things compact I abbreviated the word "Company." I also moved the half-circle outline on the paper graphic to make it look more like a roll of paper.
Let me know if you would like any additional adjustments made to the designs, I am more than willing to provide additional entries.
Hi, I still like #71 and would like to see it in the finals, but there is a slight problem, not with the nice design, but a physical problem on letterhead etc, with a logo that is positioned overhead. The problem is that right now we have a logo that takes up too much space on a letterhead, and thus the date and the "Dear Client..." is so far down the page that you etiher have to be very brief or risk going to two pages. Would it be possible to position the unfolding sheet NEXT to our company name instead of above? Thanks again, I appreciate your willingness to work with us.