Close, but the lines are too thin. A little tough to see what's going on... keep playing with it, I like where it's going. You can probably reduce some of the colors and simplify them.
This is pretty good! Maybe slight gaps in between the colors. This is pretty cool. Also maybe one version with just the outlines, and the color not filled in.
Actually... one suggestion. Maybe we get rid of the B/F and the color, and make it more of just a box and a factory. It might be interesting to see the wire version of that, because I'm not sure I've ever seen a logo like that.
Let me know...I like a very subtle idea of a factory as the logo.
Yeah tighten it up a tad so it's less visible, but that's definitely better. Still don't love the colors, but this is on the right track! Should be a bit more vibrant.
Something is off about it, but yes. It's easier to at least see the edges, but doesn't look great. Maybe play with the colors a little bit more, or define the edges even.
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Let me know...I like a very subtle idea of a factory as the logo.
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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Vcp4MvP229CClpsKFD4wZyD1fLU4QX2N/view?usp=sharing
Let me know if it didn't work.
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Need to try a few fonts. Great submission! Keep pumping out some variations of this.