This is much better. I really like the bold red. Can I see the same logo, with the same coloring, but with the spelling "Bon Dri Antiperspirant" instead of "Bone Dry Antiperspirant"?
Also, If it's not too much trouble - to see the fish as a little less "happy" might be better. Not angry, but maybe just a neutral mouth rather than smiling?
I still really like this design. The thing I don't like as much as some other designs is the fish. Do you see the fish that the designer made using a black background? I think it's my current #3 choice. I really like that fish better. Can you make yours more like that one?