I like the ying-yang feeling of this logo which is what I’d like our brand to express: masculine-feminine, superflus-necessary. Improvements could be made to the design of the crown, adding perhaps little balls. In Its current shape it looks too much like the crown of the starbucks logo! Also, I am not sure of the pattern created by the two turbans intermingling with each other. Although it is interesting, I find the pattern a bit heavy and confusi gli: how about getting the turban starting like a fan from the base leaving parts of the necks of the head vases visible? I don’t know if you get what I mean! Thanks!
I really like the feeling of this logo. However, I will till make some adjustments to the profile of the man: what happen to his chin? also, the moustache could be more rounded, his nose slightly more straight. Not sure about the name bonanova in purple. The earring of the woman could be a but thicker and look like a golden loop. Could you try to provide a version where the turban of the heads doesn't go on forever and we can see the bare necks of the man/woman?
Hi Dalhazz.. Mmh.. why don't you differentiate between the colours of the turban of the male/female face? I think that it would look nicer that way.. also.. also.. one turban could look stripy like the current one, the other one-coloured, like purple for example, or blue.. generally. purple and yellow look good together.. so, try with one turban purple + yellow stripy, the other instead one coloured, perhaps blue (not too dark, similar to that I sent in the picture). How about adding a little crown this time? Have a look at the effect of the crown in the headvases I sent you the pictures of, it is quite subtle.
I'd go circular again (see the comment on the B&W version: have a look at The Honest Company logo). Thanks.. look forward to the new version!
Hi Dalhazz, I quite like your logo! There are a few adjustments you could do though I think.. why don't you encapsulate the 2 heads into a circle where the name Bonanova runs around? Have a look for example at the way in which the logo of the Honest company is.. the butterfly in the circle.. the name 'the honest company running around it.. also.. it seems like you portrayed the faces of two men whether I' d like one head (the left one supposedly) to be feminine.. with a sweeter expression of the face-different shape of lips.. perhaps also different eyebrows directed upwards instead of downwards.. in other words, feminine face, with no beard possibly!!! Good luck!!
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I'd go circular again (see the comment on the B&W version: have a look at The Honest Company logo). Thanks.. look forward to the new version!
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