These are nice variations of our original concept. I think the font choice for the "Celebrating 100 years" recalls the historic aspect we are trying to communicate. The wreath versions are interesting, but would prefer seeing the wreath made up of hop vines and barley. I think this would be a more appropriate choice that would compliment our beer garden concept. Also, I feel the "Bohemian Hall & Beer Garden" could be made more visible with a larger font. I look forward to seeing your revisions.
One last point... Can you place "Bohemian Hall & Beer Garden" above the 1910-2010 date in the wreath versions. If you can do the same in the oval layout so that the text reading from top to bottom would be: 1. "Celebrating 100 years", 2. "Bohemian Hall & Beer Garden", 3. "1910-2010" ... Thanks.
I really like how you combined the building image and the "Celebrating 10 years" banner. I'm concerned though that the "Bohemian Hall & Beer Garden" text will not be clearly visible in the proportions used in your design. Can you try to incorporate the building/banner design element into our original oval layout where "Bohemian Hall" would wrap around the top of the oval and "& Beer Garden" around the bottom of the oval...?
In design # 20... Another option would be to split "Bohemian Hall" and "& Beer Garden" on two lines and keep it in the same location, below the building/banner image... again, we want to make the text larger and easier to read. If you can do it within the ribbon element, fine, but if you have a better solution, go for it.
In design # 51...Can you put the dates over the building/banner and bump the building/banner down a bit... this may allow you to center the "Bohemian Hall" text....
I won't be able to comment for the next 3 hours.... but I think we are close.... work on it and make suggestions... you're the expert.. :) talk to you later.
Done up to the modification of #51 .. Please check the new entries. I hope you like them. Now it's 03.25 AM here, I have to take some rest :) So, I might not be able to respond your next feedback/comment in at least 4-5 hours..
# 56 is looking good. All we need to do now is tweek it. Can you make sure that the "Bohemian Hall" and the " & Beer Garden" are centered and balanced in their placement. Are you using Copperplate Gothic in Bold? If not, I'd like to see the "Bohemian Hall & Beer Garden" in bold.
Can you adjust the "100 years" so that it follows the line of the banner. It looks a bit off.