Hi and thank you for your submission! I like it a lot I like the use of the butterfly reminds me of natural and delicate. The font could use a little sprucing up, it's a bit too plain, although I like the simplicity and elegance of the butterfly especially. I still want it to POP! Something Modern, Sophisticated and Savy. Also can you try a more unisex color scheme, and can you work with the butterfly to keep it natural but a bit more intresting!
The circle is a bit overpowering! I seem to notice the circle before I notice anything else, maybe if it could be softened out a bit by not having a actual circle but maybe more of a delicate design that encloses it and not in the circle shape. Something more along the line of the Cake Bar or Cupcake Organic links I provided. In those logos you will notice that the shape of the emblem is softened by the surrounding graphics, Cupcake organic has the soft extensions/spikes in two tones. The Cake Bar has the lacey sides that extend, and both designs use color fading to draw you in and give depth and create a high end elegant look. I also like the free flowing #14 design outside of the circle. I am unsure as to if I want the logo free flowing or an emblem so to see both versions is very helpful. And I am still not crazy about the color scheme, I don't like the turquoise and pink combination.
#17 can you maybe put a few different colors in the butterfly and maybe use the color peach instead of pink and incorporate some turquoise with the green, are you able to create any depth with the design using color shading and make the bodycake shine some like in www.thecakebar.ae kind of that color scheme maybe even the bodycake in brown so it will shine better
I am liking #18 much better! Can you insert some light complimentary colors in your butterfly wings. Like where you have the "whispies" make them a couple different colors. Do you know what I mean when I say make bodycake "shine"? I like the insertion of the design inside the emblem under A slice of the natural life.
I would also still like to work on the leaves surrounding the circle can you make it go into some type of shape but with the leaves going around the entire emblem a little more in some places less in others to form a shape. Maybe use a bit of the thin lace #18, (like on the bottom under A slice of the natural life) And put it around the sides creating a not so thick leafy look.