Body HealthLogo Design Contest

I dig the graphic! Can you please darken the grey and somehow add some space too the area where the y from Body, and the therapeutic meet? It looks a little jumbled to me.

Hi,
Thanks for the feedback.
Yes i will come up with the revision.

Best,
BL-Tami

update.
revised.
#56
Don't hesitate to ask for more revision.

Looks great! Can you also do one without the tag line. I may not always use it. Can you show one with the line included, one without?

update.
without tag line.
#77
#78

Thank you!

update.
#89 new colors variation

#56 Is the is a color variation in the grey because of a leaf that is in the background? Can you please fill it in solid? I like the look of the tapered line, but on the body side it looks to thin throughout. Can you please thicken it up so it looks more even to the Health side? Thanks!!

Revised
#90
in solid color and equal the thickness of the tapered line.
Also, i will provide logo in black background and in one color, to see how it's looks like

#91
#92
#93
easy to applied and looks stunning in black or dark background

Perfect! Thank you!!

#95
just an option for 3D looks