I really like the #304 and #305 and your shield, I think that you are on to something. I have a fews other modifications and I would like to see if I like even better.
1. what would both of them look like with the "of" smaller and placed under the BMW between that and Murrieta and eliminate the three color stripes before the M in Murrieta. You already have it in the shield.
2. maybe another option would be to move your shield to the far left adn then enlarge the BMW and Murrieta with a small "of" mas well.
3. again, I will need to see this on a white background and will need to be able to embroid this on hats and silk screen on shirts.
Thank you very much. You are on your way to the winner circle it appears.
Thanks!