Blue Water ResortLogo Design Contest

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This is absolutely in first place. No further edits at this time, Jefry. We should have a final decision soon. Thanks for all your help.

Thanks very much, Jefry. This might do it... we'll let you know!

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Thanks for feedback, I think drop shadow make logo not clean, I darker the RV Resort 1 step and 2 step darker from original color #99 and #100

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We think the RV RESORT" text needs to be a little stronger / more visible. Do you have any ideas for how to make it more bold? Maybe a slightly darker color? Or an outline? Or a drop shadow? Thanks!

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Excellent. Our new Number 1. Thank you, Jefry!

Or with less blocky for slogan.

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Sorry for late respond, I just come back after company my son in dance practice for school event. How about this sans serif for slogan?

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The trees and gulls in #96 are too large. They are better here in #95.

Please see note above about trying sans serif fonts in the tag line. Thanks!

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Update bigger tree and sea gulls

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The sun is awesome here! Yes! If we said “serif” font for the tag line, we apologize. We meant we’d like to see other Sans Serif fonts. Something less blocky than the other sans serif, but still very readable. Thanks!

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Update more vivid color on suns and reverse upside down for the color and make slogan with other serif font #94 and #95.

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Thanks again for all your work on this, Jefry. It's coming along great, and we are very close to having it perfect.

A couple of things we'd like to try.

1) We'd like to see the sun a little more vibrant, which we suggest accomplishing by increasing the gradient... a little more yellow at the top, and a little more red at the bottom.... to make the colors a bit more vivid than the current orange.

2) After increasing the gradient on the sun (above), maybe also try flipping it upside down (darker/redder on top, and lighter/yellower on the bottom). Not sure which way might look better.

3) Can we try a couple of different sans serif fonts for the "Texas Gulf Coast Sea, Sun & Fun" tag line? Maybe something with a little more style and not quite as blocky as the current one, but still clearly readable.

Thanks for whatever you can do!

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Thanks! Our new number one. :)

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update RV resort little bit bolder and slogan less bold.

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Thanks. One last request for now... “RV RESORT” a little bolder and “Texas Gulf Coast...” a little less bold. (We just don’t want the tag line bolder than part of the name).

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Rv Resort in bold serif and keep slogan in sans serif.

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Both 90 & 91 are good. Can we try one other option? Take this one (91) and make the “RV RESORT” text the bolded serif?

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Update with bold for RC Resort and slogan, also lighten the suns #90, with sans serif #91

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Also... can we lighten the color of the sun a little bit? Thank you!

Hi Jefry! The only thing we need now is to make both the "RV RESORT" text and the "Texas Gulf Coast Sea, Sun and Fun" text more clearly readable. But we like the colors that you've used, so don't want to change colors.

1) RV RESORT: can you add a bolding, or same-color stroke or something similar to bolden/strengthen the text?

2) TEXAS GULF COAST SEA, SUN & FUN: Can you try a sans-serif font that complements the Blue Water RV Resort font? We're thinking that an interesting, but solid/bold sans serif font would be more easily readable.

Of course if you have better ideas, for this, please go for it!

Thanks again!

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Thanks again for the rapid update. This is now our current number one!

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Thanks, update with flipped palm tree.

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Thanks Jefry! Can you flip both sets of trees horizontally (so the tallest ones are closest to the building)? If you need to move the birds a little as a result, that's okay. Thanks!

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Sorry for delay, update with brown trunk with 2 different shape of palm tree #86 and #87

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Yes, thanks for feedback, update still in progress, sorry for this update take a time. I am redraw leaf by leaf from palm tree.

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Thanks Jefry. Almost. The palm fronds (leaves) should be green.

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Update proposal, according you directions, let me know your thoughts.

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Update proposal, do you means like this?

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Thanks for the updates, and no worries about the delay! Can we see two more minor tweaks please?

1) The trunks of the palm trees seem dark green. Can they be brown instead?

2) if you can flip the right tree horizontally, the trees will then be mirror images (single trunk to the outside on both, and double trunk to the inside).

Thanks Jefry!

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Sorry for late respond, I am fall a sleep in front of my computer. Update with more prominent palm, brown trunk, and bigger sea gulls #83 and #82

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Also, can you also make the tree trunks brown?

Excellent. We think we’re really close. Can we go even a little bigger on the trees and seagulls? Thanks Jefry!

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Update with more prominent palm tree and seagulls

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Excellent. Thank you Jefry. Could we see the trees and gulls just a little larger / more prominent / visible on this one?

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Update proposal #72 and #73

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Will update asap, thanks for feedback

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(1) Could the tree trunks on the palm trees be brown for more contrast?

(2) Could you add a sea gull or two flying?

(3) Could the palm trees be a bit more prominent and in the foreground?

Hi Jefry!

A little more fine-tuning might get this perfect. We don't want to make things too cluttered, but can we try the following (if you think all of this is too much, maybe try each change by itself and then all of them together)?

See next comment for details.

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Thanks so much, Jefry! #45 goes right into first place!

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Update proposal #44 and #45.

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Thanks for feedback, wait a minutes.

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Hi Jefry! Getting closer we! Can we try a couple more minor tweaks?

1) Sun just a little bit bigger
2) Darkest part of sun gradient a little darker orange/reddish
3) Change “RESORT” to “RV RESORT”
4) Enlarge tag line font size a little, which will make it a little wider
5) Reduce width of lines on each side of “RV RESORT” to allows the text to match width of tag line text
6) Change tag line text to be the same color as the darkest orange in the sun.

Thanks again.

Thanks, Jefry! Our new favorite.

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Update proposal with RV or motohome #31 and #32, let me know your thoughts.

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Thanks so much for the rapid responses, Jefry! This is currently our leading contender. We'll let you know if we have any other thoughts on possible changes, but for now this is looking pretty good.

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Update slogan enlarge

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Great! Can we see the slogan widened/enlarged so that the width of the slogan is the same as the word "RESORT" above it?

Thanks!

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Update according your direction #23 with dark grey on slogan, #24 slogan in dark blue same color as blue water.

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Thanks, Jefry. Please see the comments we just submitted regarding entry #11, which is much closer to what we're looking for than this one. Thanks!

Hi Jefry. Thanks for the update. This is improved and our current favorite, but we have a couple of other minor suggestions...

(1) Change the lower "wave" line under the building to the lighter blue, so there's a dark blue "wave" above a light blue "wave".

(2) Make the word "RESORT" wider, and the lines on either side a little shorter/narrower

(3) Enlarge the font size of the "Texas Gulf Coast Sea, Sun & Fun" to match the width of the newly widened "RESORT"

(4) Darken the "Texas Gulf Coast Sea, Sun & Fun" to make it higher contrast against the white background.

Thanks!

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I am update with navi blue and light blue in different version of blue, also make the building in silhouette .

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Update proposal with wave in dark blue and resort plus dash in light blue.

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Thanks for the super-fast response! Can you switch the light blue and dark blue "waves" so the darker of the two is on top. And change the "RESORT" and the dashes on each side of it to the lighter blue.

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Thanks for feedback, update with green and sun gradation.

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Some thoughts.... we think a little more color would be good. How about a gradient on the sun (maybe more reddish into more yellowish?), and the trees being a little more green? Thanks Jefry!

Great! Thanks, Jefry!

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Thanks for feedback, I will develop and submit more variation.

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Thanks so much for all of your designs! This is one of two of yours that we like best so far.

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I submit new designs proposal, let me know your thoughts.

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