Hello Guavareal,
Thank you for the submission and welcome to the competition. I hope not to dissuade you with the following comments as your portfolio is impressive.
This submission clearly represent strength and definitely the blue collar work ethic but does not generate a technology centric feel. I recommend you visit our site at www.bluecollarsales.com to learn a little more about what we do and the technologies we leverage. You may also want to review some of the comments and contest brief here.
I look forward to seeing your next efforts and encourage you to go for a technology look and feel that imparts a hard work mentality and high achievement result.
Please let me know if you have any questions.
Regards,
Scott