You're getting the idea. Thats starting to look wicked. I love abstract stuff.
Im thinking maybe make the grey piece in the middle red? or black? The dots and lines are grabbing my attention more than the colors which I like. I really enjoy the intricate line work that you can see really well against the black background.
My only other thing would be the font. I guess Id like to see something a bit more rigid and abstract. The immediate vibe this current font throws out is a disco feel. I like it but I think Id like something that almost looks scary. I hope this is helping you out. If you have any questions let me know.
Thanks again for your work on this project. I really do appreciate it. You're a very talented artist.
I might have some time over the weekend to play with this a bit more... thanks for ranking and the great feedback... there is a lot of talent on LT ... it is fun for me. My primary business is promotional merchandise. The graphics is an offshoot of that.