Could I see this with the word bishop out lined in red as well? And maybe add the tag line underneath bishop like you did in the others? See how that looks, thanks!
From #234 to #238 - I made "Gym" bigger/stronger. I also played with layout - especially outlines. Please note that #236 has brighter red to give you more options. #234 has tagline arched above like you suggested. It also has inside outline with variable width to bring some more dynamics.
I REALLY love this, but the word bishop kind of over powers the word gym, is there a way to make the word gym a little bolder to balance it out? I was also wondering maybe what it would look like to take out the saying "helping build a better you" out from the middle and maybe have it curve under neath or over the logo itself, Thanks!!!
I absolutely love this one! I was wondering if I could see this with a black background like in #94. I also thought it might make the 24/7 look a bit better if you put the small stars around it like you did with #6...Thanks!
Thank you, you are right. I have to confess English is not my first language. I will post requested revisions together with some other changes which I have on my mind. What about "Established date" or "Since 2000" instead of 24/7?
I really like this one, but I find the phrasing a tad awkward with just "Better You", could you change it to " A Better You"? I also liked the Idea of perhaps replacing the "Better you" with just "24/7" since that's such a big selling point for us
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