Bird ElectricLogo Design Contest

In this one text is a little bit thinner than #243

Sure, no problem. Looking forward your feedback. Have a great day!

Thanks will review and let you know today / tomorrow.

Uploaded lots of revisions of this design - with different weights for text and different color treatments. Please check, any feedback would be really helpful. Thank you

Hello, please read the explanation first before checking entries. -

I've uploaded 3 types of possible slantings with different "1 R" letter treatments without tagline (to avoid too much unnecessary entries). Each entry have my short comment - Slanted ; More slanted ; Maximum slanting - equal to 3.5.7.11 logo. So you could understand clearly and combine with the tagline or other changes in the future. Plus i've uploaded 2 entries with slightly different taglines below BIRD for example. Just to show how it looks like with the "Slanted" type wordmark.
The final design will contain the wordmark and tagline you choose.

By the way these entries are with a little bit thinner wordmark than currently 1st ranked one. Do you want it to be same bold as 1st ranked entry? Don't hesitate to ask for other changes too.

Best Regards,

Arnoldas

Slanted with tagline example 2

Slanted with tagline example 1

Maximum slanting - equal to 3.5.7.11 logo

Maximum slanting - equal to 3.5.7.11 logo

Maximum slanting - equal to 3.5.7.11 logo

More slanted

More slanted

More slanted

More slanted

Slanted

Slanted

Slanted

Thank you for this design with Taking Care of Business added.

Hi Arnlogo. Sorry for delay as a few parties needed to provide feedback. Will get back with you on edits.

Hello,

Please check revisions. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.