I like Entry #42 the best of the ones that you did. The "Bill's" "RIVER PILOT" and "Service" part look perfect. Can you do a couple variations of the flur-d-lis / anchor while keeping everything else the same. The color scheme is good too. Thanks!
Some new versions for you: #50 - has a different fleur-de-lis than #42. #51 - same as #42 with a different fleur-de-lis. The shape above Bills is also slightly different. #52 - same as #51 but with Service larger. Shape above Bills is the same as #42. #53 - same as #52 but the design around Bills is different.
Let me know if you would like to see other alterations.
Can you do a small ship on top and incorporate that where the Bill's words are. In entry 53 would be good one to try that on. Thanks where small ship mostly the out line of one thanks!