Bill Flow SystemsLogo Design Contest

Thanks. These are all nice, but don't quite capture the simple modern elegance we are after.

Nice colors. I prefer the graphic with a slight gap like you had in #40, but we may want to focus on your other entry. Any additional thoughts or refinements on it?

Nice! I like the basic image. Can you try a couple of things with it? Vary the scale some. It seems a little big in relation to the text. Also can you try enclosing it in something (circle, oval, trapezoid, etc.)? I'm not sure how well it works on its own (without the text). And lastly, can you try to soften the points on the left side? Just barely clipping off the super sharp points.
Thanks again, this is looking great.

It's hard to tell, but I think the gaps got narrower in this one. I was thinking more like making them 1/2 or so the width they are now. So they really read like lines.

Nice graphic idea, but it still feels a little too much like it is in between a line based graphic and a figure/ground graphic. Maybe you could try compressing the negative space between the arcs so they read as thinner lines. That might give the extension on the upper right more contrast as it peels off and gets thick. Just a thought. Looking nice though.

Nice colors. Would like to see either a more delicate / refined graphic - like 12 Butterflies or Oxbow reference images, or a more bold figure/ground graphic like henry wilson, mountains with lightning bolt, or HV Modern.
As alway, thanks; your hard work is much appreciated!

If you haven't already, please see new reference images for the "flavor" we are after.
Thanks,
-joe

Ok thanks. If that is the case, I don't see toning color is necessary.

I don't mind toning color, but ideally the image will work well as a simple single-tone image as well. Sometimes we will want it as a simple small footer - like Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram logos are often at the bottom of other websites.

Do you mind using toning color or you want it just solid color?

Thanks for submitting just the graphics, but it is not necessary for us. I will consider each entry with and without the word art.

Better. The shorter bottom makes it feel more like a "b" but I think it still needs something - not sure what though. I'll try to figure out what I'm thinking and comment again.
Thanks!

Yup, it is a purpose to make it a subtle "b"

Looking good. I like the graphic part, but feel like it needs to be either a little less or a little more like the letter "b." Right now it sort of looks like one, but I can't decide whether that is on purpose or just a coincidence. I'm okay with it either way, I just want to make sure the design intent is clear and deliberate.
Thanks!