#85 is a great submission. I can totally see that on a business card. I can't really see it on a fabric label though and that's what is stopping me from ranking it higher. If you could incorporate a logo of sorts into that design, I can totally see using this idea. Also, try something "not to ice cream-ish" for the bibs. The dots are cute but our first thought when seeing it was Dip&Dots ice cream :p.
Since we see how this looks, maybe get rid of the "Quality Hand-Crafted Accessories" part for the logo, but we can maybe add that later for the print version. I don't know. Give us some feedback on your thoughts if you want. The idea is great and we really want to see more from you.
Thanks for the resubmissions! They have given us a lot to think about. Here are some of our initial thoughts.
#118 is really nice, except we like the balloon font you used on BIBS on #85 and #86. The only issue we have with that font was the polka dots inside it. We think that the BIBS "may" need something inside it to give it some play, but maybe the dots were too much. Do you have any other ideas? Also, we like the "and" in #85 better than the simple one you used in #118.
What we would like to see on revisions would be:
#118 with the BIBS font from #85 with and without dots. #118 with the BIBS font from #85 with a different pattern or two. A variation with the Bib image from #118 without the curly twists on the end of the bib, maybe a bow, or a knot.
#144 #145 #146 #147 #148 Here are all the changes you requested in your private message... I changed the bib with a few different versions, and darkened the blue on "buttons" made the ".com" a tad bigger and a few different back ground colors, also one you can use on your website with some shine and shadow...Thanks so much...Looking forward to hearing from you... Peg