Beyond StoryLogo Design Contest

Hi Everyone,

I can't wait to see the story you share for Beyond Story! I live in the United States and am currently in Bali with 14 other Entrepreneurs finding ways to secure our dream businesses. One of my teammates got a logo completed through this service and I'm the second tester so.... we're hoping to have 100% success with your wonderful designer minds coming together to create our "zen" logo's!!!

Get in your flow and rock it!

Thanks for the important work you're doing in and for the world.

Doctor Gordon

I've listed comments for three designers. This is a great start. I like the idea of a "mark" like in #9 that is inclusive of the words. I also like the use of color in #9. In Design 11 I like the idea of the pen telling that it's more than a story -- almost mapping out something.

I also commented on #7 and # 8 with the subliminal affect of the use of the letters for a logo mark -- the S & B being positioned where one is in the shadows. However, the lettering / font didn't speak to me as much.

In numbers 3 and 4, I like the whimsical feel of the quill. Adds a classic element as well. Though I love the lettering in 4, I'm questioning if it's too feminine.

I wil continue to review and see how these might fit in with everything that I'm branding it for.

Thank you!