Better Vision Development CorporationLogo Design Contest

Sure..but l will provide this one separated via email. Because at the logotournament only winning design that have to provided in the JPG and EPS format. Thank you.

I think this is simple and professional. For font l can inform to you after l back in my computer, brcause l am going out now for an hour. Thank you.

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Nyoba

I want to confirm that you will be able to include this in the final files you provide. Also want to confirm that this can be reduced in size and saved as a custom bullet point for power point.

Also, is this a font you have created or one that we can access for business cards? If this is unique, what is a standard font you recommend to use that complements this for use in powerpoint?

This is really good. I want to finalize this design. Are there any other fine-tune adjustments you think would improve the logo?

Hello,

submission update on #179 thank you.

Hello,

I am going out now..l will update soon after back on my computer.
Thank you

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Nyoba

This is our favorite. Can you please put BETTER VISION on a single line similar to one of your earlier versions (your logo #164, ranked 6th)

how about this one

These small circles are in a concentric circle pattern. Doesn't look that good. How about putting them in rows? I'm trying to see if this would improve over the bars - which is nice.

update #176

I will update soon. Thank you for your suggestion.

I have an idea - can you replace the striped bars inside the sphere with smaller spheres? small enough so you could fit 20-25 of them... might look cool!

hello,

I am glad if this is better, actually I have tried several option in my previous entries but you don't like them. As far as I don't have another option. Thank you.

This is a much better way of stylizing the letter "O". Very nice use of the arcs and whitespace. do you have any other ideas for what could fill the sphere in the middle?

Hello,

I have updated some entries for this one with focus on "O" you can check the variations. I tried to avoid the overused style. Thank you.

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Nyoba

This is looking better. I would like to use the “O” as a logo by itself at times, either in the upper right corner of a PowerPoint slide or perhaps as a special bullet point”. I want you to focus on this element of the logo and see if you can make it even better. Try rotating the image counter-clockwise. That may give the appearance that the “eye” is looking to the right a bit. Try playing with the size of the crescent. Also try playing with the color where you reverse and put the dark blue in the center and the lighter color as the crescent (it may need an outline). Just play with this some. I think we are good with the lettering font for now.

Please take this one and do some variations using the stylized "O" you have in the other versions. You can also play with color a bit in the BETTER VISION. I like the sans serif font...

Thank you for your feedback,,,I will update the font soon. Thank you.

Nyoba. You are the top ranked at the moment. We like this design among your submissions the best. Can you also give me a sans serif font for the words. If we choose you as our designer, we will work on the "o" more to get it right but this is okay for now...

Hello,,

Thank you for your feedback in my designs. I am sorry I cant copy two circle, I just have concept that other didn't do it. here is competition and every designer has concept to protect, I just try to respect each other designer in this site. I hope you understand with my explanation. Thank you.

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Nyoba

also put the development on the other side of the line and also lower as it is here

still not right with the "o". please see Uncle 3's "o" and mimic that...it's two crescent moons. very creative

Actually you will see the same thing in the 2nd ranked logo by Uncle 3

I need you to modify the O in vision so that it is stylized similar to submission #93 (where you see overlapping crescent moons that form the letter)

Please let me know if you would like to see any revisions (fonts, colors, layout etc).

Thank you.