Thank you for your comments. Just uploaded Entries 23-26 with the symbol centered. also uploaded Black and white versions as requested. please let me know if you want to see anything else.
Could you explore extending the menorah to the right of the vertical line on number 99 (by extending make the shades of blue a wider -- so the arms of the menorah become more visible.
Extend the menorah on the left of the vertical line of image 102
Extend the menorah on the left of the vertical line on image 100.
In short, the mark needs to read a little bit more like a menorah -- but still keep the ambiguity.
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In addition could you try extending the arms of the menorah . . so that one half of the image would have white arms and the other side of would have solid arms with no ground in between.
This is difficult to explain via email -- let me know if you don't understand.
could you also reformat 100 like 99. Flip it and put the logo to the side 99 but use the same font as 100 the the same layout as 99 with the same type layout as 100. Tx
Hi, Thank you very much :) Here are entries #107, #108 - Same as #99 with extension to the right, entry #109 with solid arms. Entry #110 - Extended side, same layout and font as #99. Entry #111 - same as 110 with solid arms. Entry #112 - Extended side, same layout as #99 Entry #113 - Solid arms, same layout as #99 Entries #114,#115 - another variation... #116 - same as #102 - with extended side, same font as in #100 Please let me know if you want to see more changes \ variations (hope I understood the solid arms part... :) Thanks
Entries #120 - 127 - the versions you asked in grayscale #125 - solid black, #126 can be printed in 2 colors (Pantone color you choose and black) - instead of 4 colors (Process Color) Let me know if there is anything else you'd like me to try
Hi, Here are the updates: entry #132 - Solid colors, slightly bigger and fewer leaves, the image size is twice the height of the type. entry #133 - simplified leaves (without the line in the middle), image size 1.5 than the type. Entries #134, #135 - tried to make the menorah more like a tree :) Versions for #99 - #136, #137 - solid colors, #138 - one color with tints, image is twice the height of the type. #139, #140 solid versions for #100, image size 1.5 than the type #143 - #144 - solid versions for #131, image size 1.5 than the type Please let me know if there id anything else you'd like to see :)
Hey. . please do not remove any of the ones not selected from this last batch (those are in the not interested logos). We are trying to sort through the logos and are using the not interested column to help keep track of the variations of the many logos.
For logo ranked 1. Please flip - branch going the opposite direction; change the type of those ranked 5; reduced the number of leaves to a few (1 to 3) and try a version completely black and white. like logo ranked #11.
Hi, Thanks for the feedback :) Entry #167 - sans serif font the right Entry #168 - lower case font, slightly brighter, the image with solid colors Entry #169 - same font as #100 on the right #170, #171 - background same color as the site Please let me know if you want more revisions or combinations.
Thank you for all your hard work with this logo. As we get closer to the end could we ask you to do a few more versions.
Specifically, we would like to see what happens to the left edge of the logo if you match the right edge. We definitely like the informal spacing and width of the branches of the menorah -- so we don't want to go too far and make completely straight lines anywhere. However, let's see what happens if you experiment with the left edge in making it a bit more deliberate. Tx.
We pulled this one back because we liked it because it had more of a tree reference than menorah reference. We would you to experiment making it less vertical and more horizontal --more of a rectangle and elongating the left side of the tree/menorah (not the longest side). Look at number 19 for example.
By way of background trees are a very important symbol for our congregation as the campus is surrounded by them (some very old). The history of our current building is that it was a former estate with gardens and woods.
So we are open to your iterations on this mark with this in mind. We did not feel the leaves were particularly successful but perhaps there might be other things you could try that would communicate a stronger reference to a tree.
Hi, Here are the updates: #189 - #192 variations on #173 experimeing with the left edge. (191-192 - tried straight edge on all sides) #193 like rank 13, only wider on the left. #194 - #201 - Tried to make stronger reference to a tree. (Thanks for the explanation :)
Let me know what you think, if you want to see more modifications Thanks