Just as an experiment, can we try the cleaner look but with columns on both sides of Bertel, so it almost looks like the columns are holding up the "roof"? If you think this will make it too busy then it's not worth it. What's your opinion on this?
have incorporated the pillar in #49 and #50.The pillars however does make it busy ....and BERTEL has to reduce in size. #51 is an option without the actual 'pillar' . #42 although incorporates a similar look.
I like the columns better in 49 but I think you are right it does make it very crowded. I think the proportions (spacing) is off on 49. Bertel does not seem to be centered
I really like the concept of 64 65 and 66 but I think it looks very digital or cartoonish, is there a way to improve this? Also I would like to see them with a white background as well. Nice work on the concept though, let's perfect something now....