Berry'd AliveLogo Design Contest

Hey Rapunzel,

What does this logo mean? What does it say? What’s its story?

Ummm. Not sure. It isn’t very creative. Or clever in its conception

#125, #126, #127
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Thanks so much for the feedback! I'll do my best to create a logo that fits your needs more appropriately.

An example for a mix of both CLARITY and MYSTERY in a single logo... from your own work... is the work you did for designer lashes :) It is very creative and has a beautiful creative story to tell

This is simple and artistic in its cursive writing style. What it lacks is a "punch" like a logo should have. So, could you try to bring in some element that makes it a real logo without cluttering with too many graphical elements? An element that brings clarity to the brand being a cafe with desserts mainly, but at the same time adds a sense of mystery that leaves the observer wanting to know more about the brand and its offerings. A minimalist approach but with a story to tell.

Hi,
Please let me know if you'd like any revisions on my design. I'd be happy to provide changes based on your feedback. Thanks!
Pam