Thank you very much for time and effort submitting this AWESOME initial entry Baco. This logo option is already fantastic... seems like you really understand what we are going for and we really dig your work! I do not want to hinder any of your creativity / design work, but just as a reference point I have gone ahead and uploaded some other small images of the main competitors in the space we would like to emulate that might help spark some further ideas. Thanks again!
Only feedback in terms of the current submission: - Would like to see what 3 stars looks like spaced differently, both in the 'B' and also above 'BAT COMPANY' - Some color inclusion (keeping to 2-3 colors) with whole logo, stars only, various colors on each line etc. - Maybe some different style fonts to look at, open to arched and flat text, script and non-script fonts. - Just some overall variation to the design outside this particular concept for consideration.
Appreciate your time submitting this new design (#5), again really liking what you've done.
Things I like about #5 when compared to #4: - The three stars on the bottom part of the 'B' - The whole term 'Bat Company' fits better under the word 'Beltway' - Liking both the script from (#4) and non script in (#5) fonts as options - Inclusion of some colors that I am trying to consider
Feedback for your consideration on #5: - Afraid the shadow effect might not transfer well (totally aware a bat is a really strange item to design for) - Think I prefer the 'B' to be at least slightly disconnected from the 'eltway' as it is in #4 - Possibly shift the two smaller stars in the 'B' slightly down to the left to align with the ' downward point' of the 'B' / perpendicular line - Open to the idea of possibly a right-justified (or maybe even center-justified) simple 'Bat Co.' in lieu of the full 'BAT COMPANY' - Maybe eliminate the shadow, leaving white interior with black outline and a slightly darker red color used in the stars and/or on "BAT COMPANY" or "BAT Co."
Love what you've done in #7 and #8, and as always thank you for your time / effort.
Things to consider - Like the size proportion better in #7 - Like the font selection for the business' full name better in #8 - Possibly a lower case or just smaller font 'o' in 'CO.' - The stars in the loop provide a 'space / galaxy' vibe... although I do like the idea behind it. Perhaps keep the solid loop but put the three stars back on the bottom of the 'B' only with same red coloring as in #6 (like the idea of stars being the only accent color on the entire logo)
#12, completely nailed it, 'knocked out of the park'... if you can deal with the cheesy joke. Don't think I even have major changes to suggest to you. Probably the only things I can say at this point with this particular design idea is: - I'd like to see what #12 looks like in both blue and black (so just a black colored version of #12) - Also both blue and black versions with and without the loop
That's all I got for you this round... thank you again for your time / expertise. It is truly appreciated.
Thanks Baco. Like both new submissions. Feedback: Would like to see #44 with, no loop, and filled in solid blue (no border or shading) with no other color except the 3 stars (Open to white, grey, or red)
Really dig the new layout as well in #46 Feedback on that: Can I get the same 'B' As requested above, solid blue color (no border or shading) etc. and see what it looks like ditching the B on "Beltway Bat Co" so the large script 'B' reads in line with the 'eltway' portion of the more horizontal logo. aka align 'eltway' directly above the 'Bat Co.' rather than re-use another 'B'
#54 is my new first choice! Love it. Really like EVERYTHING you've done, and genuinely appreciate your hard work from day one. Wanted to let you know that I just found overlapping text / graphics won't appear clearly enough in our process that they make sense. I am happy with #54 but if there is any way to incorporate a 'loop' in to the logo without overlapping / intersecting or compromising any of the other text I would still be open to suggestions. My thought on #54 was a somewhat narrow 'halo' in the same blue color immediately below (basically underlining) the 'Bat Co.' part of the logo only. That is about the only last thing I would like to see as an option that I can think of... otherwise, as always still open to any of your suggestions. Thanks again!
I owe you a HUGE thank you! Just a flat out awesome logo, and your effort alone deserved the win. Genuinely appreciate all of your time, effort and attention to detail here, and even the offer now for potential other designs tweaks in the future. My personal email is joedevine3@gmail.com, and I will be sure to reach out if anything is needed. All files should now be downloaded and approved, thanks again and congrats!!