Believers PawnLogo Design Contest

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amy

i will work on and upload again soon amy

Amy, I like this. Originally, I really liked the way you incorporated the fish in the design, however, I am now interested in a version without it. Can you do something similar to this, but without the fish, and a solid red color. Thank you.

would the red and blue board be a base for the letters to stand on with black outlining. just a thought.
amy

I will work on and upload again soon amy

Of all your designs, this is my favorite, however I am still struggling with how to turn this into channel lettering for the exterior sign. Any suggestions?

lI Like the pawn word in this. I would ask for some other options on believers. I sent a survey and the common response was the pawn logo looked like McDonalds. I really like your work. Especially the way you subtly incorporate the fish in your logos. As mentioned in the general discussion, feel free to get creative with the colors. I like many of your submissions with the words side by side. Don't feel obligated to stack them. Also, I really like the font and lettering on your submission #84. However, the fish was a little overwhelming for my taste. Thank you.

Thanks for feed back i will work on and upload again soon

amy

I love the way you've incorporated the fish. My concern is this may not work with channel lettering on an exterior sign, and it may be difficult to embroidery on a shirt. Can you create this with the BELIEVERS in blue, the FISH in white and the PAWN in red - in channel style lettering? I'm really looking to make the word PAWN stand out. Any suggestions on varying font size?
Thank you.