Hi Diyandesign - These aren-t quite going in the direction we-d like, the flower doesn't really say anything to us or have anything to do with us. The font is a bit too cold. However, we did like what you did for Microon in one of your past contests...a bit more bold.
Thank you for your feedback, CH. I'll try create some other works with and without symbol as direction you've gave. I hope I can find any proper ideas to fulfill your need
Instead of make P as shadow of B, I try to make "Pa" as mirror of "Be". I also try to playing word to be "be partners" to find out if it may give a meaning to your business.
Thanks for trying the new ideas. I think the reflection, while clever, isn't really working as you read it as "Pertners." Plus, the empahsis, while intended to be on "Be", comes off as emphasis on "Lief"
We took a look at the other logos you've done - in your profile - and we like the strength, yet simplicity of microon, weedo and crimmins. Perhaps this can give a better sense of what we're looking for.
thanks for the big efforts diyandesign. have a read of our notes on the main page for more inspiration and ideas. the main stuff to focus on is looking for a connection to what we're saying in there about being human, helping companies improve their customer touchpoints, making complex things simple, seeing things from the customer's point of view, etc.
connection, being human, customer touchpoint, complex to simple, customer's point of view, customer service... I know it may be hard thing to package them as one in a logo, but since I know you are a good CH with a great direction and appreciation, I don't mind to take that hard thing as part of my job.
As I promise to you before, I'll take my part in your competition till the end by submit new work intensively... Just feel free to throw my work that doesn't fit with your need. It can help me better understanding your need.
thanks for all the efforts. good to see you integating human elements into the logo - 149 to 147 is a little too "religious" for us. perhaps explore a few otehr ideas with humans, and maybe some of the other ideas in our notes.
...you're a logo machine! you're not quite getting it, though. your ideas tend toward lighter and more playful...perhaps look to go a bit bolder and stronger. the smile is cute - it made me smile, as a matter of fact, but not what we-re looking for.
Thanks CH, let me think your last feedback here as your appreciation to my effort so far... And I thank you for that. I have submitted another design alternatives I can pull off from my head :) And... I still in digging to find another way...
yes, "logo machine" was meant as a compliment! you've got a creative mind that can generate a lot of ideas and we can see that. you're not quite hitting the messages we-re looking for, but it is certainly fun seeing what you come up with. 310 is the strongest of your recent efforts, while 304 is a bit too playful. stay away from that kind of approach - think solid, elegant with only a "touch" of playfulness or creativity...