hi doi. well, you guys need feedback if you're going to do good work, right? at the same time, i've found that not many of the designers actually engage us in conversation or ask questions...which can be frustrating. you are an exception to this, as you've responded in writing to most of our thoughts...which we appreciate.
so, let's see. we can understand what you're trying to get across in 482-485, but don't feel it's coming through elegantly enough. it feels a little too...not sure..."boxy" maybe? we prefer the simpler approaches you have in 464, 486. perhaps just focus on that, tightening the "partners" into the Belief a bit more.