Example 1: wordmark only, combining "F" and "P" into one letter. my idea was to emphasize partnership.
Example 2 and 3: added abstract mark symbolizing a "+". the plus stands for partnership and communication as it is usually used to bring two things together.
What do you think? Any feedback/suggestions are very welcome! =)
Hello dodi. Thank you for all your ideas. We think they are quite abstract and the same time a little bit too rough . We took a look at your other designs and we like how you're treating Bloombaber, Neronote, Mai Lounge and also the Malt Library (second design). They have all a more explicit but quite elegant relationship between the font and the graphic element. Our business is mostly based on relationships between people, perhaps this can help you to generate some new ideas?
hi dodi....i keep coming back to 141. perhaps there is something here. could you explore it a bit more...see ifyou can find a way to make it a bit more distinctive, a bit more edgy, a bit more...i don't know. but i think it's worth playing around with a little bit. gruss aus zuerich.
hi dodi. 141 remains your strongest idea. let's leave that idea for now, as we like it very much and want to reflect on it for a bit - what else do you have? any of the ideas from the notes on our main page inspire you?
i have tried out a different idea. in the abstract mark i visualized the process of making complicated things simple or better reducing complexity to simplicity. Additionally I have incorporated your idea of glowing and explosion to visualize and emphasize "belief". what do you think?
hey. 338/9 are really sharp. really appreciate you exploring some of the ideas we've thrown out there. the star shape might be a bit too playful for us, though. might be a bit too disconnected from the wordmark as well. look to integrate a bit better. and, as always, try exploring some totally different ideas as well. And, NO NEED to submit different versions/colors of the same design unless we ask. we'll just bin any similar looking designs since it clutters up the logoscape and makes it harder for us to get through everything. again, thanks for the big efforts you're making!
thanks for always providing feedback! unfortunately only few CH‘s do this as regularly and detailed as you - so thanks for making our work a lot easier by sharing your opinion. =)
in my newest entries i focues on the three parties involved in your work: you, the client and the customer as you mentioned in the briefing that your company „helps businesses improve the quality of their customer touchpoints „. hence the abstract mark i created shows the connection of two parts through a third part. Meaning belief partners enables clients to connect better with their customers by improving touchpoints. i hope you like it!
hi doi. well, you guys need feedback if you're going to do good work, right? at the same time, i've found that not many of the designers actually engage us in conversation or ask questions...which can be frustrating. you are an exception to this, as you've responded in writing to most of our thoughts...which we appreciate.
so, let's see. we can understand what you're trying to get across in 482-485, but don't feel it's coming through elegantly enough. it feels a little too...not sure..."boxy" maybe? we prefer the simpler approaches you have in 464, 486. perhaps just focus on that, tightening the "partners" into the Belief a bit more.