thank you again for rank and feedback. Here my update as your request, more refined on frog , more balance with sky and moon and try with various taglines. Let me know if you need something to be changed again
> Thicker crescent moon > Could you make the font more bold like in #125 and not as spaced between each letter > Could you make the "TO" smaller like in #125 > Could you go with a tag line: "A Better Life. Beginning Now." > Could you place a log behind the head of the frog, like a pillow
Versions of the above: > One with tag line in grey > One with a darker blue - please see attached blue > One with "TO" in a blue color
> Can you darken the tag line, so it stays grey but is darker > Can you make the log, the same color as the tag line > Can you move the "Begging" text to the left slightly and embolden a little > Tag line should read: "A Better Life. Beginning Now."