dear contest holder here are my entries #2 #3 #4 just to make a start . please feel free to contact me for adjustments or color combinations kind regards Tzina (lotus creative)
Thank you very much for your entries! Well, I love all of them... Especially the star concept instead of a dot on top of the I :) Here are my comments if I may:
1) I decided not have any emblems, so don't worry about creating a special visual image for my logo :) All I want is to be able to write BE-LIVE IN U in an inspirational, empowering and shiny way:) So, your logo entries would be great without the visuals they have on top :) 2) I ranked your #2 entry as my number 1 because of its color combination. Purple background and silver letters. That's what I exactly want. We don't need no red or any other colors :) only purple background and silver shiny letters will work for me :))) However, when it comes to choosing the font, I like the other fancy, playful font that you used in your other entries as well. I especially liked the STAR concept instead of a dot :) So, is there any ways that we can create a font that is still BOLD in size but still fancy and playful in style? Maybe that's what is the best for me... 3) As a background, I would really love to see some infinite space with shiny stars, similar to your entry # 4, but more infinite, more in-depth... if you google the images of "shiny background" you might get some ideas about what I have in mind :) 4) Oh, about the font of the slogan, my first choice is your entry # 2, because it goes well with the font of the be-live in u. However, I agree that we can't create both the slogan and the logo itself with the same font. So, if you can show me more alternatives, I'll be able to choose easily :) Because, the colors are set, no need for visual images or emblems, all you need to create is bold and fancy font alternatives with a shiny glittery background :) Therefore, I am waiting for more options!
Oh my God!!!! That's it!!! I love your works! All of them!!! I don't even know what else to tell you :) GREAT JOB!!! MY GOOODDD! YOU KNOW HOW EXCITED I BECAME :)))) thank you....
Ok.... let me now come back to my senses and evaluate your job :) 1) We can try different logotypes. It's beautiful right now but as good as it is, it can always get better! Let's try more silver font types.... both capital and small letters...like in your entry #8... I guess I'll go with ALL CAPITAL style, but if we can come up with a bold and powerful enough font style, I might consider using Capitals only for B and U (for my initials like in entry #8) 2) We can also try different styles in the texture of the font as well, right now, it's dotty right...so we can make try different textures, could be abstract geometrical shapes, shady color tone plays, swarowski texture or pure solid silver color texture.... let's try all these... can you [please? 3) the background... you did an amazing job!!! you got me already, didn't you? :) Entry # 9 is my favorite so far because of its background... because it has that special shining star far away on the mid top of the background... your entry #8 has the same background and so far they are by far the best !!!! 4) the font of the slogan is the best when it is in contrast with the logo .... thx for creating alternatives... it's great when I am able to see and decide. I know entry #8 was created for this purpose. and as they both have the same font, it's not as strong as the others....it's also valid for CAPITAL versus SMALL letters used in them...that's why I love your entry #9 the best....perfect contrast, beautiful spiritual and inspirational background... color coordination is at peak... glitters all around... a page designed for SWAROWSKI :))) awesome :) so.... when you consider the slogan, I know you want to contrast the logotype and the slogan fonts and the usage of capital-small letters and I agree with you, do it. If you try small letters in the logotype, use capital letters in the slogan... contrast is what we want....
Oh, by the way, why do we have the "U" letter so close to "IN" ? I am guessing it's because of the font you are using currently, right? Because it's a different word and to me,. the space between the letter E and I is larger than the space between the N and U... I mean the N and U look almost adjacent... Would you mind looking at it as well please?
I am hoping that you are having lots of fun when you are playing these glittery shiny stuff :)
Dear Burju thank you for your kind words.and the great feedback that you providing. I am enjoying working for you. there is so much positive energy coming out of this. It seems like you are a very positive person, so it is a pleasure working for your logo. here are some revisions #13 #14 #15 Please feel free to contact me for further adjustments or color combinations until we reach the point that you are completely happy with the logo best regards Tzina
Hey Tzina! Here I am again, extending my contest as I need more alternatives. And I have only A day left! Could you please create more alternatives for me? I have 2 designers I need to choose from and you are one of them ;) Let's do this!
1) and over your design # 31, I want to see my slogan more clear I mean it's almost blurry the way it is now. Can we make it in silver color and brighter? So that I can read it From even further away? 2) and, can you please use "Let your power shine out!" as my slogan, I wanna use this one instead of what I have now :) 3) can you please make the sparkling , glittery effects also more visible like you did in your other designs? The sparkles can be white as well :) I want them really shine Out as they are the shiny stars in the sky...u know.. And you can make them in star shape, in glitter shape and/or diamond, bright light shape... All I want from The sparkling affects are they need to shine!!! Bright and glamourous shine! 4) also, can u make the letter u a little apart from the word "in" They look adjacent but they are different words 5) last but not least, can you also do some magic on the spacy background so that it also let my logo read more clear while the background provides the mysterious shiny feelings on PEople? I believe you can absolutely do that! I like your style! This logo is so important for me! That's why I am being very picky about it, I hope you understand And I believe you do :)
So, that's it... Minor changes ... But great results!!! I am waiting for your new entries;) Love, B
I am coming to the end...My mind is coming clear and so far, I can tell you that I still like your #31 the best! 1) Can you get rid of all the purple, pinkish dots on that background of #31 and make the glitters brighter? I guess I 'll go with a simple but effective style... that's why I am thinking we don't need any confetti's in our background, only the bright lights and star-like glitters to represent the shining power.... 2) Oh, also on your entry #31, can you use my "Let your power shine out!" slogan? But with a more visible font and style? Bold font again, can be white in color...
what you did with the letter U is so amazing!!! It expresses the power of you! yourself! awesome! love it! thx! 1) Can we try small letters in the same font of #59 and the same style, and only B and U in capital letters? Wanna see how it'd look in small letters! 2) Could you also leave some space between Be-live and in ? The same amount of space between in and u? Just making clear that those are different words...you might wanna lower the distances a little bit if you want, but I just think the space between Be-live and in and the space between in and U should be the same. 3) Oh, by the way, can we please add an exclamation mark at the end of the slogan? Let your power shine out! 4) And if we can erase all the roundish whitish textures on the background and leave only the glitters and sparkles as they are I guess it'll be more classy as it'll be sleek, simple . (I am talking about the round effects above the letter B towards the upper left edge)
Dear Burju thank you for the appreciation.and the great feedback . it is a pleasure working for your logo. here are some revisions #75 #76 #77 #82. I hope that this is the feeling that you are looking for your logo Please feel free to contact me if you need adjustments best regards Tzina
Dear Burju thank you for the appreciation.and the great feedback . it is a pleasure working for your logo. here are some revisions #75 #76 #77 #82. I hope that this is the feeling that you are looking for your logo Please feel free to contact me if you need adjustments best regards Tzina
I am thinking and judging over and over again... I guess I'll go with my first brief, the infinite space.... which means with you.... however, I still need some minor changes and revisions on your design if you don't mind (or if you don't wanna terminate me :)
1) Is it possible for you try another font type for the slogan? somehow the exclamation mark and the letters do not feel perfectly right for me... some more alternatives before I go ahead and choose it... 2) For the shining, enlightening effect under the letter U, how can we make it so that the beams wouldn't be so obvious? maybe with dashes? or bright to fading out to dim? I like it the way it is but I wanna still look at other options, again, before I make my mind on it.... you understand? 3) And can you please add those glitters you used in your entry #31 around B and U ? You know what, now that I looked again, I guess I like your # 77 the most :) so let's work on it and let's do the changes on it, ok? I love it :))) I guess it'll be it... let's do this Tzina :) I am waiting, thx dear!
Dear Burju here are variations of your logo according to your requirements and with different fonts. Please feel free to contact me if you need adjustments best regards Tzina
Dear Burju here are variations of your logo #85 86 #87 #88 #89 according to your requirements and with different fonts. Please feel free to contact me if you need adjustments best regards Tzina
Thanks for the fonts, we got it ! the font of my slogan is the one you used in your entry # 87. It is a powerful yet shiny font itself !!! let's go with that.
I like the jewelery font of my logo as well, I love it a lot! So, we are going with that!
The color is as is right, purple.... we are going with that.... By the do you have PANTONE # for my purple logo that I can check and use when I print my stuff please?
The concept is what we have as well, the space, the shining stars concept. However, I need some final revisions on the spacy, infinite, shiny and glittery background we have please: 1) First of all, as I was writing in my brief, the background concept of my logo is going to represent the infinite light we have in the universe, and the power within us will let us shine as much as the infinite universe does. Once we discover that light within us... So, this is the basic message I am trying to convey with my logo. Therefore, the background needs to resemble as much about the infinite universe as possible with its mystical, metaphysical, space-like shining stars in it. And right now, I love the background we have but somehow I am not %100 satisfied with it. The way it is in your entry #87 for example is more like a night scene with traffic beams, you know... I want it more like to be a universal shiny space... Actually, to give you a solid example, here is I am sharing a link with you: http://claireawada.com/ Here, you will see the shining sky background that I am talking about. So I would be very much happy if we did get closer to that background with shining stars in the sky... with star-shapes and star lights...
2) Ooo, and the purple round effect around the letter U is a little too much right now, so we don't need to have it in our concept right now. (in #87)
3) And last but not least, the stars around B and U can be smaller and shinier, like the ones you used in # 8. I guess I really wanna see REAL STARS :) That's what you have in #8, if you look, right next to the letter U, you have a solid, little, real star-shaped STAR and I LOVE that star :) Let's use some real stars in our background, shall we? That's how you shine your power out anyways :)
Looking forward to my star-shining sky background :)
dear Burju thank you for sharing the link, it helped a lot :) I have prepared for you some variations of the logo you are fond of. The background is like the infinite universe and space-like shining stars in it and starlights and some "real star shaped" stars :) #91 #92 #93. I hope you like them. this type of design with the gratuated tones has excellent printing results when it is printed in CMYK mode or in RGB mode if it is digitally printed. Pantone colors are good if the design has solid colors . Please let me know what you think and feel free to contact me if you need any last adjustments best regards Tzina