Bay Park SmilesLogo Design Contest

Thank you

Thank you

Man, that looks good. Thanks again for the updates.

That's awesome. Very nice work on this.

what you mean somthing like this?

I think I prefer the all caps. As I'm looking at the design again, I'm wondering if there isn't an opportunity to use the initials of the office in the shape of the sails: I'll try to use the markup tools to show what I'm thinking. Basically the "B" can be formed with the negative/white space around the left sail, and perhaps the right sail can be tweaked a bit to look more like a "P"

I like these proportions more than your earlier design, and the the smile shape feels more like a smile. Thanks for the updates.

You might've noticed that they've allowed this tournament to go back to the Finalist Stage. If there are any new ideas or further variations you can make on this design currently in the top 5 we'd appreciate it. We want to give a number of designers a chance to improve upon the designs we like the most. Thanks for all your work!

OK, Thank you

We really like the work you've done. We are trying to move some other designers into the top 5 spots for further revisions. Please do not withdraw your designs or take this to mean we no longer have interest in them.

In this design, apart from the symbol of an abstract smile, there is also a boat sail depicting all the beaches, seas and waters

I'm sorry I pulled it because this morning I saw that I didn't make it to the final round, please leave a comment so my design can be close to what you're looking for

I will have more feedback shortly. You are one of our five finalists currently. Please consider reactivating your designs, since our owner has not yet weighed in

I've reactivated them, any feedback on my designs?

I'm not able to constantly update our rankings, so some designs slipped in ahead of you inadvertently moving you down the list. This is one of our five favorite designs right now, so we'd appreciate you reinstating.

That looks quite pretty. Very pleasing to the eye — good balance and proportion. Nice work.

Solid. I like the font choice, but I'd be curious to see how this would look as a vertically stacked logo.

I'm not as big a fan of the dusty or grey blue, and I think I prefer yellow as an accent over this orange.

Like the nautical feel of this color scheme. Could we see a version with another lighter blue color as an accent somewhere?

Man, I really like that icon. I'm not totally sold on the font choice, but this is very solid.

Please check some update designs

I like what's happening with the font and the colors. I just don't feel that the repeated smiles in the "A"s is as impactful as we want it to be. Perhaps one smile that crosses both "A"s would be more visually engaging?

See my previous comment on the other logo you sent like this one.

Solid design.

Really like this design — I'd be curious to see what it looks like with a more vibrant color palette.

Not quite enough going on with this logo. I like the smiles working as crossbars on the "A"s, but having two feels like it diminishes the impact.

How about this one?

Solid design, though the visual/abstract element feels like it could be a part of a logo for any kind of company, not specifically dental

I think this would work better if the yellow smile actually did intersect the "A"s and formed their crossbars, making the "A" frame look more like the corners of the smile

I don't think the sunrise works as well in this image. In general, as a dental office, we want to avoid sharp blade-like or needle-like imagery in the logo.

Thanks for the classification

Thanks for the classification

See my previous comment.

The owner has voiced that he is not looking for the initials of the office to form a major logo element, apart from more abstract or creative approach to their use.

Very clean and professional…it just needs something to make it more visually engaging.

please check #138

Thans for feedback, what you mean like #139

Clean, professional and upscale. Nice work on this. I'm not a huge fan of the A's without the crossbar — could we see it without?

Like where you're going with this. Can you possibly design this in such a way that the smile shape actually crosses through the A's and acts as their cross stroke?

That's a very engaging logo to look at. The problem I see is that the initials/pyramid looks a little too sharp and aggressive: as a dental office, we always try to avoid branding the is suggestive of blades or sharp points, etc.