Bay Park SmilesLogo Design Contest

Yes, thank you.

Thank you for the updates! We'll have more feedback from our owner soon for you.

Hi,

Please check my design updated. Thank you.

Just some further feedback I've received in the past week from our owner: He seems to like designs that have a connection to our old Brodhagen Dental logo, whether it's color palette or abstract shapes. He has also shown interest in having the name of the office stylized as either "BayPark Smiles" or "BayParkSmiles," using with color or font thickness differentiating the words.

You might've noticed our tournament was extended. I know you haven't been in the top spots for some time, but you've created very nice designs, and I wanted to be sure to give you the chance to update or add any new ideas you might have. Thanks so much for your work!

We are trying to move some other designers into the top 5 spots for further revisions. Please do not withdraw your designs or take this to mean we no longer have interest in them.

This is another design we like. Thank you for reinstating.

Please consider reinstating your design submissions. Our owner is just now getting to weigh in on designs, and we feel this is one of the stronger concepts. Thanks.

The fine detail of the leaves won’t translate well to embroidery or small print projects, but this is a very inviting design

This tree design works s little better since it’s green and the blue smile beneath it is reminiscent of water.

I’m not a big fan of the orange/yellow heavy color palette. I like the tree abstract, but it doesn’t feel like it’s particularly emblematic of our area or industry. This area has many trees but we’re really know for the bay.

Also very nice variation.

Very nice update on this one.

Very nice design on this. Great balance and proportion. I wish the rainbow didn't have such a politically charged and divisive connotation in our society, but it unfortunately does. Perhaps a water element or tree could substitute for the rainbow?

Solid design here. Like the overall balance but it feels the sunburst and smile across the "A" in Park are disjointed or somewhat at odds esthetically. I'm going to attempt a markup to show what I'm thinking: basically, is there a way to make the lower arc of the smile fall where the lower arc of the sun would be?

The two vertical lines on the smile aren't really working for me.

Solid design, but the visual/abstract element feels like it could be part of the logo for any kind of business, not something specific to smiles or dentistry.

Thanks for this update!

I like this design. Bright, inviting, and clean. I'd be curious what this would look like without the sharp corners of the smile. Can you remove those?

This is are clean and professional looking, but none of the logo designs you've submitted with teeth shapes will work for us.

While we're not using tooth shapes, I like overall design of this one. We're aiming to have any abstract or icon element incorporated into the name of the office, rather than having it stand above or beside the name.

Unfortunately, our owner does not want to use any tooth shapes or outlines in this logo.

Thanks for your submissions! We'll try to be as responsive as possible with every design, but there might be some long stretches without comment. I like the clean look and balance of this design. It feels a little "safe" but it's well done.