Bay Park SmilesLogo Design Contest

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Thank you for the updates! We'll have more feedback from our owner soon for you, but I like what you've done.

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to submit new entries.
Here are some revisions with "BayPark Smiles" and "BayParkSmiles" and slightly different colors.

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Just some further feedback I've received in the past week from our owner: He seems to like designs that have a connection to our old Brodhagen Dental logo, whether it's color palette or abstract shapes. He has also shown interest in having the name of the office stylized as either "BayPark Smiles" or "BayParkSmiles," using with color or font thickness differentiating the words.

You might've noticed our tournament was extended. I know you haven't been in the top spots for some time, but you've created very nice designs, and I wanted to be sure to give you the chance to update or add any new ideas you might have. Thanks so much for your work!

We are trying to move some other designers into the top 5 spots for further revisions. Please do not withdraw your designs or take this to mean we no longer have interest in them.

I understand and you can see font alternatives in entries #297 #298 #299 and #300.

Of course, if you like this icon I can combine it with the fonts from any of my other entries.

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I’m thinking the cursive script is just too fine for our needs.

Like this one a lot

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Really love that icon. Wonderful use of color.

Very nice! Thank you for these updates. I'm going to be getting feedback from our owner on these shortly, and I'll pass that along when I can.

I understand, take your time.

Thank you for letting me know.

Thank you for all of these updates! I'm awaiting feedback from our owner.

Thank you for your feedback and appreciation.

These are a few variations based on your requests. Please let me know what do you think of them.

If you need any other revisions please feel free to ask. Your feedback is always welcome.

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Definitely more of what we're looking for in terms of level of fine detail and proportions in the name. Very solid concept and execution.

Very nice concept, but the previous issues I've raised stand: too fine of detail, gradients could be an issue, and Smiles needs to be as prominent as Bay Park.

While I like the sunburst/smile icon, the detail is too fine there. Smiles could use a different font (or the same font as Bay Park) and to be more prominent.

Great sun over the waterline/smile shape. That's a very strong icon for our office. I'm not as big a fan of the font of "Smiles" and it should be at least the same prominence as "Bay Park".

Very sharp design here. I do wish there could be some suggestion of a smile shape within the abstract icon, and "Bay Park" feels too small in relation to "Smiles."

I'm a big fan of the mosaic look of the icon above the name. We wouldn't want to much intricate detail, but I really like the use of color and how you've rested it in the smile shape. My only issue, as you can probably guess, is the small size of "Smiles" in relation to "Bay Park"

This one is probably not going to work for us as it stands, since we want the word "Smiles" to be as prominent as the rest of the name. The sun forming the Y would probably be more effective if the right "arm" of the Y looked more like one of the sun rays. Great color.

This is a very solid design. Feels very warm and welcoming without being unprofessional. I'm not a huge fan of this font (though it is very similar to what our old logo had). Also, if there's a way to make that wave look like (or have a portion of it that looks like) a smile, that would be something we'd love to see.

Thank you for your submissions! I really appreciation the clean and professional-looking design. The color choice is spot on. Gradients, however, are tricky: we need the logo to function on very small print jobs and embroidery, so we don't want to rely on fine detail or gradients too much. Also, "Smiles" should appear as prominent as "Bay Park" in any design. Thanks again.