Bay Park SmilesLogo Design Contest

Awesome. Thanks so much for the updates!

Hello!.
How are you?

Thank you for your comments and also for the opportunity.

Here are some new proposals for your review #650 #651 #652 #653 #654.
I hope you like them.

Remember, any comments or suggestions, please let me know.
It will be a pleasure to continue working.

Sincerely. Daniel.

LT support has agreed to move the tournament back to the Finalist phase, so I appreciate any updates or variations you have to this design, Daniel. Our owner likes the clean simplicity of this design. He has expressed interest in tying the new logo back to the old Brodhagen Dental logo (either through the abstract arcs or the color scheme). He also seems to like the stylization of the name as "BayPark Smiles" or "BayParkSmiles". Thanks for any further adjustments you'd like to make.

Hi, Daniel. If there are any further variations you can make on this design currently in the top 5 we'd appreciate it. We want to give a number of designers a chance to improve upon the designs we like the most. Thanks for all your work!

Much appreciated!

Thanks for these updates!

Thank you for the opportunity.
I have uploaded some proposals with some adjustments, for your review.
I hope you like them.

Greetings. Daniel. ;)

If there are any further variations you can make on these top-5 ranked designs (or additional ideas to explore) we'd appreciate it, Daniel. We want to give a number of designers a chance to improve upon the designs we like the most. Thanks for all your work!

Very nice!

Hello!

Great, thank you very much for your comments.
I hope the owner likes some of the proposals.

Remember, any comment or suggestion, I remain attentive.
It will be a pleasure.

Greetings. Daniel.

Very nice update based on my feedback. Thanks, Daniel!

That's a very clever integration of our initials

This is also quite good. I just don't know what our owner will think of the icon as a standalone element.

This one might be the strongest of this group. Nicely realized.

Thank you for all these new updates. I appreciate you attempting to make the initials of the office into an engaging icon. I just don't know if any of these newest designs are working. I'll have more feedback from our owner soon.

Hello!
thanks for your comment

What do you think of this version with a very subtle mix of letters P and B?

Any comment or suggestion, please let me know.

Greetings. Daniel.

Feels like that swirl could have a suggestion of a B and a P perhaps in its design?

This is probably the best variation yet on that circular icon: nice work on this!

Clean and inviting. I like that the water/wave connotation is subtle within the smile. I think this might be the design I'm most excited about from you. With some development, this could be outstanding. I wonder if there's more of a way to integrate the smile/abstract icon with the name of the office?

This feels a little too surfer/tropical for our purposes, though I like the use of wave imagery with the smile.

This is a very eye-catching design. I like the subtle incorporation of the smile into the abstract icon.

I like the wave and smile hybrid idea. This is a little too reminiscent of a harpoon or sharp bladed instrument, however, and we definitely want to avoid those connotations for a dental office. Maybe there's a way to soften that sharp feeling?

This is much more effective being a larger icon. By the way, this inspires another idea you might want to pursue, Daniel: the capital B — if you're thinking of a digital readout, for example — contains the letters P and S within it. I wonder if there's a way to create an icon based on that fact.

Really like that you're trying to incorporate visual or abstract elements into the name itself. It's not having quite the effect here that we want (those elements are just too small I think), but this is a good direction.

I'm not a big fan of the "shadow" effect on these designs, but the wave imagery is something to explore.

I like what's happening here, but the gradients and subtle color differences aren't going to translate well to embroidery or small print jobs. We would like a logo/icon that can stand alone as even an outline.

I like what's going on here. Very nice colors and engaging icon/abstract circle. I wish that icon suggested smiles a little more.

I like what's happening here in terms of color and proportion. The abstract icon is also visually engaging.

Hello!

Thank you very much for your comments and for rating my design.
It is a pleasure to be participating.

Please take a look at these new proposals #332 #333 #334, thinking about the readability of the spiral shape. I hope you like it.

Remember, any comments please let me know.

Greetings. Daniel.

I like the swirly concept, but the fine detail of the spiral isn't going to translate on embroidery and small print jobs. Perhaps make the swirl more like a wave shape? This is very visually engaging.

Thank you for taking time to submit these designs! We'll have more feedback and rankings shortly as we get our owner to weigh in. Thanks again.