We weren't as happy with the updated font choices you made. We're looking for "Bay Park" to potentially appear stylized as "BayPark" and the whole name as BayParkSmiles or BayParkSMILES. Could we see some variations on color and font. We do like how the abstract icon looks, but different colors would be welcome.
Nice design. I like the green color you've used, and the font choice is nice. But this lowercase spelling is probably going to lead people to think the name is Baypark Smiles, not Bay Park Smiles—could you make the capitalization: BayPark or have a space as: bay park
I'm not a big fan of the "L" as a smile…it doesn't quite come across as a smile shape. But I like the fonts you've chosen and the slightly smaller icon looks good. Could we see this with a normal "L"?
Our owner recently had another chance to look over all the logos with me, and he felt this design was one of the strongest. When we move you into the top spot, we'd be interested in seeing some variations to things like font and color. Thank you!
If there are any further variations you can make on this design currently in the top 5 we'd appreciate it. We want to give a number of designers a chance to improve upon the designs we like the most. Thanks for all your work!
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