Please send versions of your Entry #29 where the graphic is to the Left of the church name. I like the graphic you have in #21 or possibly #18. See if you can change the font for "Barnsboro" to be a bit thinner and more spread out. Keep font simple. I am liking Blue more than the purple or definitely not Read. Trying to keep logo in 2 colors for less expensive printing in future. Keep an eye on those I rank #1, #2, #3 for direction as to what I am looking for. None have caught my eye yet, but they are getting closer each day. Thank you.
Definitely making progress here . . please make the following changes to your entry #36: Remove the bright star and little stars, it's too much detail for embroidering in the future. Enlarge "Bible Church" text to fit under the "A" in Barnsboro, out to the last "O" in Barnsboro. Shorten your arc line under Barnsboro to only be under the lighthouse; to look like the ground; this can extend to just under the "B" in Barnsboro. Then adjust the height of the lighthouse & arc graphic to extend a little above & below the text of Barnsboro Bible Church. Put a little more space between Bible and Church; it looks like it is one letter-space apart, maybe make it two letter-spaces apart. Sorry for being so picky, but I have a good idea of what I want it to look like. Thank you for your patience with me.
Again, thanks for the feedback. Don't worry, until we have time, we can change anything :)
I have a doubt, I can see the same "thing" in entry #28, especially:
"Shorten your arc line under Barnsboro to only be under the lighthouse; to look like the ground; this can extend to just under the "B" in Barnsboro"
Please let me know if it was your own request from the designer. If so, I can do it for you, but if not, unfortunatelly I'm not allowed to do the same thing. In the meantime please see my new entries.
Yes, I have been giving very specific change requests to 3 of the designers, so the changes are probably coming from me. Please focus on your entry #64 and make the following changes: 1) remove the blue ring around the top of the lighthouse, as you did in #65. 2) Change the font that you are using for the word Barnsboro to be simpler or cleaner with a little more spacing between the letters. 3) I like the font and spacing etc for "Bible Church" but make it fit between the "A" in Barnsboro and the last "O" in Barnsboro; this allows the arcs underneath the lighthouse to not crowd the "B" in Bible. Comments: I like the double arc under the lighthouse . . I like the sharpness of the cross at the top of the lighthouse . . and I like the height of the lighthouse relative to the height of the church name. Please show me a couple new versions with all of the above changes, but use different fonts for the word Barnsboro so I can see which I prefer. Thank you.
Yes, you were very specific about the changes, looks like you know what you're looking for. However, could you please confirm me, that you were asking the designer doing these changes:
"Shorten your arc line under Barnsboro to only be under the lighthouse; to look like the ground; this can extend to just under the "B" in Barnsboro"
Sorry for this, I just wouldn't want to use any idea from other designer.
Yes, I explicitly asked the designer to shorten the arc underneath the lighthouse so that it does not crowd the "B" in the word Bible. I really like your entry #86 and will now ask you to change your double arc under the lighthouse to look more like a single 2-color arc as you did in your entry #63. The way you have it in entry #86 it looks like ocean waves which I do not care for; would prefer it to look like entry #63. Remember, keep it short so that it does not crowd the word Bible. Thank you.
Another thought . . once you've made the above changes, can you send me different versions showing a couple different fonts for the word BARNSBORO? I went into MS Word and thought "Cambria" or "Georgia" or anything close to those might work. You know fonts better than me, but I'm trying to give you an idea of what I thought looked nice. Again, I am by no means a designer, but I am interested in seeing different options before I make my final decision, so I hope I'm not offending you or the other designers by being so active in this process. Thank you for being patient with me.
NP, and thank you for all of this! First I wanted clarify the misunderstandings, this is why I was asking you, and I contacted with admin and the designer.
But now it looks I'm okay here. I'll be working on it!
Hello, sorry was away for the day. I am liking #107 and #103 the best, but I cannot tell what the difference is between them? Please explain. Also, I know we are nearing the end of the contest so can you show me two or three versions of #107 where you "slightly" change the color of the dark blue to a "slightly lighter or different shades of the dark blue. Some other entries I've looked at have a slightly lighter shade of blue that I may like so I wanted to see your ideas on alternative dark blues. Last thought, I see why you liked the changes to the arc under the lighthouse in #111 thru #116 and I agree it does look nice, but I wanted to keep our logo as simple looking as possible. Seriously great job and I'm sorry I am such a plain jane. Lol Thank you.
Hello, sorry was away for the day. I am liking #107 and #103 the best, but I cannot tell what the difference is between them? Please explain. Also, I know we are nearing the end of the contest so can you show me two or three versions of #107 where you "slightly" change the color of the dark blue to a "slightly lighter or different shades of the dark blue. Some other entries I've looked at have a slightly lighter shade of blue that I may like so I wanted to see your ideas on alternative dark blues. Last thought, I see why you liked the changes to the arc under the lighthouse in #111 thru #116 and I agree it does look nice, but I wanted to keep our logo as simple looking as possible. Seriously great job and I'm sorry I am such a plain jane. Lol Thank you.
Only 4 hours left, one more request, after you change the shade of dark blue can you show us one or two versions with a single arc under the lighthouse in light blue. Then take that version and make both words "Bible Church" in light blue so we can see what that looks like. Right now, I like the way you showed Bible in light blue and Church in dark blue, but I just want to see what it looks like if they are both light blue. Thank you.
We would like to make our final decision today between you and one other designer Visartes. Our staff likes your lighthouse better than the other, but we need to see two more versions to make our final decision. We would like to see version #122 as follows: 1) show us #122 but use the font for "Barnsboro" that you used in your version #101, no other changes. 2) then take that version and show us what that would look like if you shorten the two arcs under the lighthouse just a little; maybe 10% or 15%. We may very well like it the way you have it, but we just want to see what it looks like a bit shorter. We expect to make our final decision today. Thank you.