I understand about the car :) I am trying to play off the word "Express" and show speed, power, movement, etc. so I have tried the concept of a Rhino bulldozing through the barcode. Please let me know what you think or if you have any other suggestions for imagery.
I know the concept of using an animal was something Night Owl first introduced and I don't want to step on his concept so I have spoken with him and worked out an agreement. But if you have any other ideas, please let me know.
Love the rhino. Thanks for talking with night owl. love the font and color. can you refine the rhino? (no idea how...just another look may do the trick!).
Thanks so much for your feedback. I'm glad you like the design. If there is any way you can elaborate on the rhino, perhaps what you don't like about it, it would be helpful as I'm not really sure where to go with it :)
Thanks for the feedback. That rhino is SO cool! Lets focus on that. Here are somethings i would like to see:
Can we try and add some detail to the rhino? I really like its positioning, aggressiveness (and it's not overly aggressive). i think it might need just a hair of depth.
I like the colors. Can i see that on a black background?
I'm slightly concerned about the logo being read backwards with express being on top. What do you see? can we see a version with express under barcodes? i still like the white space in the barcode (which is typical).
Thanks for the update. I like this variation. What about something in between? How about using some more grayscale in the rhino...instead of black and white? I feel like such a jerk telling a graphics designer what to do :(
I hope you take my ideas with a grain of salt :)
Also, can i see a different light source across the word 'barcodes', please? I hope you are having a good weekend! Just saw the movie Argo...you should see it! :)
That rhino is SOOOOO COOL! You Rock! Just a couple other looks, if you don't mind:
1. Please put express back up under the barcode. 2. Can you make the rhino just a little darker gray? But please keep all the same shadowing, etc. 3. Can we see a version of the the word 'Barcode' in red, a version in blue, and a version in green? Can be same color brightness as orange.
This is looking very good! Just a few last looks before we make a decision, please:
Would like to see the word 'barcodes' above the rhino and barcode...same size. Also, could we see 3 different shades of that copper color? I think we might like a copper / broze...maybe just not that one.
I'm so sorry, I just saw you message. Sure, I can submit some additional colors. I have to run out for a bit, but will get you those as soon as I get back in.