I like it - the more I look at is the more it grows on me..... I like the playful font that is still easy to read.... also a lot of times when people have submitted a large symbol it is overpowering but this works great b/c there is so much white space it balances everything out. I like it. I honestly am not sure what to tell you for improve - Im not sure this is 'the one' but I like it. I would like to see anything else you come up with.
hey, i just sent you a rather lengthy email so check it out when you get a chance - okay so #254 does not have the same feel as #145 ..... could you just keep playing with #254?