I'm afraid the whole keyhole concept is too "clever" and not really obvious,
I like the new bodies on the family. We work with overweight families and your people look just right.
Would you please:
1. Erase "Family Is The Key" We won't have any slogan.
2. I'd like to replace the keyhole background with a simple circle that contains the family.
But cut the circle off at what is now the bottom of the child figure. So the bottom of the circle will be flat.
If you can see entry #12, you will see what I want. Can you use the same dark blue as in entry #12?
Can you make the heads of the people a little closer together so the family isn't quite so "tall". See #12.
3. "familyprofile.org" will remain under the flat part of the circle.
In summary, I like entry #12, but I like the shape of your people better. If you could make yours look more like #12, but use your people, I think that would do it.
Thank you again for your patience. I needed to try the keyhole concept and you helped me see that it just didn't work.
But the child's body is too big for the child's head. Same is true for the mom.
Can you make the mom's body a little smaller (narrower and shorter) and make the child's body even smaller than the mom's? But keep their heads as they are now.
Also, try cutting off a little more of the bottom of the circle.
Can you find "Arial Rounded" font to use for the lettering?
Here's two entries as you required, I'm referring to #35 and #37 as you can obviously see, I modified the bodies but by doing that I had to modify the distance between them, as you can observe in one, the family are closer so the cut in the circle is deeper, and the other the family are apart as in the old design, but the cut inside the circle is obviously smaller. I changed the font, I used "Arial Rounded MT Bold". I searched on the internet, the simple "arial rounded" costs about 29$ and the whole family costs around 100$, so this one is the closest I could find to your request, that is free. I'm still searching maybe it's offered free somewhere, but you could also send it to me to use it if you feel the bold type is to different to what you want. Best regards :)
Done cutting the circle, but I wasn't sure if you just want a single gradient or lighting like in #27 so I made two for you, one with lighting, but the darker blue as you asked from #35 , with text as wide as the circle goes. If there's anything you want to change, just let me know. Best regards
I can't decide whether "FAMILY PROFILE" should be one word or two, but I'll figure that out.
I appreciate your patience in making so many changes and trying new things.
I am happy with what yo have created -- The best designs always appear simple (like this one), even though a lot of trial and error is sometimes needed since the client (me) doesn't know what he wants until he sees it.
I'm happy you like it :) It's absolutely no trouble for me doing modifications. I'm just glad you are satisfied with the end result. There's still time left on the contest, so if you could think of anything else you would like to see, please don't hesitate. Best regards