I love the second eye showing!! Could you soften the chin line on the right and get rid of the shoulders? I liked the width of the circle on the earlier ones.. sorry to ask so much but I really like this design and I hope we can make it work! Thanks so much!!
Hi, don't worry, I love doing revision, please don't be hesitate to ask me for doing any change to the designs. Here is the update, I remove the shoulder, make the chin line softer and change the circle to the original one. Let me know what you think.
Thanks Edwin! I like the hair shape of #51, I just didn't like the hair covering the second eye.. and the longer hair makes her neck look too big.. can you give entry #51 bangs and add the other eye? did you look at the image that we uploaded by any chance? Thanks again so much!!
Hi, thanks for the feedback. Of course I can do the revision for you, but since your contest is already in judging mode only the 1st rank designer can still submit the revision, you need to put designer who you want to make a revision to the first place so you can receive their submissions. Thanks
Hi, thanks for re-ranked my design, here is the revision, add the second eye and make the hair softer, her neck is not big anymore and I also remove the shoulder, let me know what you think.
Thanks Edwin.. this is much better!!! Could you review our uploaded image and try to make her look more like that.. the bangs just outlined and broken up.. the hair just an outline versus solid black... make her more sultry and seductive..like she is hiding a secret... feel free to use that image if you want..it's a drawing that we came up with so there isn't any copyright issue. Thanks Edwin!! I'm excited!!
Edwin, I love entry #102!! Can we tighten up everything by having the tail of the word 'bad' cross over the her shoulder line and the curl of her hair overlap the bottom of the letter 's'? Thanks again! I think we have a winner!!
I like this better! Can the tail of the 's' and the hair not just meet but wrap around each other a bit? Other than that I think we are good! Thanks Edwin!
Kind of like that.. :) just maybe wrapped once around instead of twice.. a little looser.. if you'd like to try adding the devils tail.. feel free.. Thanks!