We like #467/70% better because it doesn't distract from Average Joe Survey. For us there's really three elements to the piece: the icon, the brand and the tagline. We'll use them as a single piece for our website and ads, but we'll want to use the icon (AJS) as our ID piece when we can't use the entire piece bc of available space (like a favicon). Is that permissible?
Also, would you be inclined to work with us on other projects such as websites, survey design, font standardization, etc.?
We checked 450 against our website and discovered the weight of the gray color in the tagline looks almost identical to the weight of the fonts in the nav bar directly under it. We'd like to see the tagline in 450 as darker so it isn't overlooked against the nav bar. Could you take a look at the nav bar and offer a darker 450 tag line or other 450 solution? www.theaveragejoesurvey.com Thanks!
Love the v's! One more request and I'll shut up for a while: in order compare the new stylized version, could I now see a version of 447, but with 291's round icon? Thanks!
Could I see it with the icon smaller -- more in proportion to the Average Joe "side" and with the icon positioned like a stop sign, with the top/bottom oriented as parallel? Thanks.
This is such a strong piece I hate to monkey with it but am still looking for something proprietary. Could I see the AJS icon in an octagon... the idea conveyed being "Stop here." I don't want it in red so much as a subconscious suggestion. I also wonder what a couple of stylized "v"s would look like -- where the right ascender of each forms a line halfway over the "e" net door. I also think the piece is constructed around threes: the words, there initials bit four tag line words; since "No Lean" is essentially the same thing as "No Spin", I'd like to see the next version without "No Lean" but the tag line a bit darker. These are just ideas to see if any of them enhance the piece. Thanks!
This design hits all our simple/honest/humble buttons. But the three words are common (our fault) and will be hard to trademark without something proprietary. Think of some additional element, color variation, modification that gives us a proprietary mark. Thanks!
Wow! Nicely done. Love it! The drop shadow in the icon acts like a shadow off the brand. And the tag line is a very nice foundation for the piece. Well done!!
I like the cursive font as it is readable at a glance. Could I see it without the green box in the b.g.? And I'd like to see an icon margin left that ties it all together. The tag line should be all sentence case. And we need some color to make it less stark. Green or blue or gray. See if you can't tie the icon in with the brand using a common color. Nicely done!
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I can provide the entire piece of the logo, also the icon
yeah, I would love to work on other projects with you
but if I can't, my friends will try to handle it
Also, would you be inclined to work with us on other projects such as websites, survey design, font standardization, etc.?
Thanks.
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it is pure black for the slogan
the point is to make the slogan more darker??,
am I right?
the darker is 70%
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let me know your feedback please
Thanks!
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maybe the color or the font?
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