#124 is in the right direction! Nicely done, please spell the name of the client right. I would like to see it (on white) with some different type faces now. Here's an idea: http://www.dafont.com/black-jack.font?text=Authentic+Smiles&psize=l - but it would need to be bolder. I like the script feel - Kind of like the Fender logo. Also, let's see the guitar pick in a solid color, maybe even one that looks rendered (http://images.all-free-download.com/images/graphiclarge/guitar_pick_set_clip_art_10763.jpg) with a highlight. Let's try some color variations too... less saturation on the blue might be nice, maybe include another color with it as well (just an idea: 9AD5D6). I would also be interested in seeing the type below the pick or over it with a slight shadow. Thanks much!