#54 - can you do with a different font for Australisian Convention? Something with a little style or edge to it (but still strong and readable). Perhaps also make you first letter of both words 110 or 120% height of the rest of the text?
Can you give me a hue change on the bridge - say from very beep blue at the bottom to mid blue at the top of the bridge? Just something subtle. One of the uses for the logo will be up on the big screen at the Sydney Convention Centre, and as the screen is so large, i need some detail build into the logo image to give it a little lift and zing. Folk will be starting at it numerous times over the course of the weekend event. Other idea would be to build some texture into the bridge ends and span?
Can you give a slight drop shadow effect to the bridge ends? - again, we won't use this version for one or two colour images, but will help 'lift' this image when used for the big screen and the opening of the Convention.
Can you make the text "We're On A Roll" as a slightly darker grey.
Can you make the date text slightly lighter, and match the Opera House image grey to this? (to give a little focus and punch to the "We're On A Roll'" text.
If you hadn't already guessed, the restaurant chain that I work with is SUBWAY Sandwiches. We will insert the SUBWAY logo at the end of the selection process - but I think it will go right in the middle of the bridge span and above the 2012 Convention text. Can you allow for that in your image and perhaps lift the Australisian text higher and drop the 2012 Convention text lower. I like the idea of the disappearing bridge effect and would suggest you should lengthen that gap to allow for the SUBWAY logo and still keep the disappearing bridge.
ABOVE BRIDGE - can you change the text to "We're On A Roll" in white - in a straight line overlaid on top of the Opera House as per what you current have.
BELOW BRIDGE - can you change the text as follows;
March 16-18, 2012 AUSTRALASIAN CONVENTION
First line in small type and green colour Second line in capital type, larger font same as you current have if it will fit and gold colour to match Opera House
Note - make sure you spell 'Australasian' as above, your spelling is incorrect as you are missing an 'a'.
Keep the reflect effect on the bridge ends - maybe a bit stronger as that looks good and mimics the water.
sorry for the mistake in the writing, because I just followed what you wrote in the brief:)
I have changed the layout of text I see a change in the middle, have a little more space, and do not seem narrow, and all the text in it can be read more clearly. how do you think..?
I agree - looks great, but a mistake in the placement of the 'We're On A Roll' text.
Remove the 'AUSTRALASIAN' text from in from of the Opera House and place the 'We're On A Roll' text there, you can use the same font as you used in AUSTRALASIAN.
And can you give me a purple option? - the red one got ruled out as it is close to the colours of a competitor.
#126 & #129 - can you add a third firework. Here's the reason.
Australia and New Zealand have been No 1 brand in their countries for some time, but we recently became no. 1 worldwide.
Can you give me two fireworks either side / matching as you have it now, but add one slightly bigger / or with touch of colour to the top middle - thus will symbolize no. 1 worldwide.
A small touch, but one I can use to help build the meaning if the logo.
Thanks. Stan.
Just in those two colours is fine - blue and purple. Ta.
By now you will have sen at you have been listed as second placing.
I want to thank you for all your work and for responding to my various alterations so quickly.
Your design is top notch and really we all agreed that we would have been happy with either of the top two designs.
It came down to a vote and you lost out by the narrowest of margins.
Again, thanks for your efforts. I'm a regular user of this site - so look forward to posting other design competitions in the future that may attract your services.