Hey there - here's something a little different. My concept is to present the image as if a child has written the text and drawn the picture. It might be a little off-putting, but I think it drives the point home.
Hi Thanks, it is very different to the others hey? I'm quite interested to see where this one can go. I'm not sure I like the font I actually find it difficult to read. At first glance I didn't actually like it, but the more i look at it the more I see potential in it.
Hey there - thanks for the feedback. I would be happy to do a variation with a different font so you can compare. In the meantime, if you think of any changes you might want to see that would make it better for you, please let me know.
Really prefer this font! much better. The wording probably just needs to be in different order though.
It should read...
child sexual abuse the silence is deafening speak the unspeakable make a noise
you have given us plenty to think about.
we'll see how this ends up but we have thoughts of using the 'Make a noise' section of the logo for a pin with possibly our website url around the outside.
Thank you for your feedback and the new ranking. I have made the changes as per your comments.
For #51, I rearranged the text as you suggested. For #52, I am showing you an example of the main focus of the design in an emblem for buttons. I took the blue from your organization's logo. Because of the round shape, I had to change the placement a bit. For #53, In case you might wonder about consistency in application of the design, I took the placement from the emblem and applied it to the logo.
we are leaning toward entry 51 but we like your earlier idea with the red black red black... also I think with the speak the unspeakable it might look a little better slightly smaller and directly underneath the make a noise.
Thanks also for doing the button it looks great. Just not sure whether we need the blue surround.
we've had a couple of comments with regards to the eyes over the mouth. dont know what you could do there but possibly a little rounder to make it look more like a face... some people (not me!) think they look like whiskers
Hey there - based on your last comments, please check #54 and #55.
For #54, I went back to alternating black and red for the text. I also positioned "speak the unspeakable" beneath "make a noise" as requested. As far as the eyes, I reworked them slightly so you can compare.
For #55, I centered "make a" and changed the blue color around the emblem to red.
I am very happy to continue working with you on this. I have great respect for what you do and am glad to help in this small way.