Thanks for your entry! The balloon just looks like clip art. In terms of the font, we are looking for a much thicker and bolder ASYLUM and the "get committed." isn't the font mentioned.
Thanks for submitting these designs. We really like some of these elements.
Unfortunately I do not like the balloon stencil in 28-30. It is well done, just doesn't fit the aesthetic of this show. I really like the balloon in #22, however, the string would need to double or triple in length and have a space between itself and the word ASYLUM. The balloon in #19 and #20 is too clean... so keep going with the direction in #22.
The ASYLUM font is almost on the money, however we have used this font before from the internet; or at least one very, very similar.
I am torn about the color blocking behind "get committed." It could maybe have a stamped or spray painted on effect, but I don't think in the end, I would choose a color block.
We really like the balloon in #22. Could I maybe see a version of it where the "shine mark" is moved slightly up and to the left... just want to see what some different spacing would look like. Thank you!
OK, it is not necessarily what I was looking for, but I really like the concept of the font of ASYLUM in #33. I would like to see some of the distressed marks outside of the font taken away. I really like the sort of over-bled aspect that it has... but am wondering if we can sort of push the "3d-ness" of the font a little more. Think as much depth as it could have would be great.
You can keep the shine mark where it is in terms of height, just move it slightly to the right.
I just think the string is a little too thick and waves a little too much. I love the style of it, it just needs to be slightly thinner and maybe you could try working in a curl in at the bottom?
I think we should lose the black color block behind get committed.
Like the fonts in #32 and #37, but the same changes to everything would still apply. Would also like to see the distressed debris eliminated from ASYLUM in #32.
Really feeling #50! Can you still make the string just a teeny tiny bit longer and still keep some of that beautiful thickness change in the string, and have it wave just a tiny bit. We don't want it to look like sperm, but the string should make it seem like it's flying.
Love the textured idea in #52. I'm not sure if it's the one that we would use, but thank you for trying and reading the brief!
#80 I am really feeling this design. I love the string and I don't want to see it's shape or design changed; however, I need the string even a bit longer... probably going up to where the shine mark starts on the current design. The balloon itself can also be enlarged probably about 20%. I understand that essentially the design will have to "zoom out" for this to happen. The title and slogan can probably also get a little bit larger.
This is my favorite string design and also like the font. Our plan with this font for ASYLUM is to be able to fill it in with red whenever we would like to use the title without the balloon image.
I'm going to bin the string possibilities and fonts that I'm not going to use, but keep this design as the number one spot as it is the front runner right now.
#116 is really what I had seen in my head. We like the boldness and size of the title. Is it possible to see the "get committed." just slightly larger... like let's say that right now it is a size 10 font; maybe just make it 11 or 12. Also, I would like to see the balloon head a little bit larger.
Also just wanted to make sure that per the brief, you will be OK sending me a second version of the logo where the "get committed." changes to "getcommitted.org" .