ASYLUMLogo Design Contest Logo Design Contest Contests / ASYLUM ASYLUM has selected their winning logo design. For $400 they received 123 designs from 16 different designers from around the world. Find out how LogoTournament works How LogoTournament works Contest Entries by raymer Return to Contest Return to Contest 1st #122 Withdrawn New #121 Withdrawn New #115 Withdrawn New #108 Withdrawn New #107 Withdrawn New #80 Withdrawn New #75 Withdrawn New #74 Withdrawn New #72 Withdrawn Prefers others. #123 Withdrawn Prefers others. #116 Withdrawn Prefers others. #106 Withdrawn Prefers others. #105 Withdrawn Prefers others. #64 Withdrawn Prefers others. #63 Withdrawn Prefers others. #52 Withdrawn Prefers others. #51 Withdrawn Prefers others. #50 Withdrawn Prefers others. #38 Withdrawn Prefers others. #37 Withdrawn Prefers others. #36 Withdrawn Prefers others. #33 Withdrawn Prefers others. #32 Withdrawn Prefers others. #31 Withdrawn Prefers others. #30 Withdrawn Prefers others. #29 Withdrawn Prefers others. #28 Withdrawn Prefers others. #22 Withdrawn Prefers others. #21 Withdrawn Prefers others. #20 Withdrawn Prefers others. #19 Withdrawn Prefers others. #4 Withdrawn Prefers others. #3 Withdrawn Prefers others. #2 Discussion bobbymiga Client Thanks for your entry! The balloon just looks like clip art. In terms of the font, we are looking for a much thicker and bolder ASYLUM and the "get committed." isn't the font mentioned. 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer ..ok, ill get on the changes now and will upload again shortly :)ray 12 years ago bobbymiga Client Ray,Thanks for submitting these designs. We really like some of these elements.Unfortunately I do not like the balloon stencil in 28-30. It is well done, just doesn't fit the aesthetic of this show. I really like the balloon in #22, however, the string would need to double or triple in length and have a space between itself and the word ASYLUM. The balloon in #19 and #20 is too clean... so keep going with the direction in #22.The ASYLUM font is almost on the money, however we have used this font before from the internet; or at least one very, very similar.I am torn about the color blocking behind "get committed." It could maybe have a stamped or spray painted on effect, but I don't think in the end, I would choose a color block.Thanks for submitting these! 12 years ago bobbymiga Client We really like the balloon in #22. Could I maybe see a version of it where the "shine mark" is moved slightly up and to the left... just want to see what some different spacing would look like. Thank you! 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer Hi again, thanks for great feedback, i will work further on #22 in the direction you request and will upload again soon :)ray 12 years ago bobbymiga Client OK, it is not necessarily what I was looking for, but I really like the concept of the font of ASYLUM in #33. I would like to see some of the distressed marks outside of the font taken away. I really like the sort of over-bled aspect that it has... but am wondering if we can sort of push the "3d-ness" of the font a little more. Think as much depth as it could have would be great.You can keep the shine mark where it is in terms of height, just move it slightly to the right.I just think the string is a little too thick and waves a little too much. I love the style of it, it just needs to be slightly thinner and maybe you could try working in a curl in at the bottom?I think we should lose the black color block behind get committed.Great progress! Thank you for listening! 12 years ago bobbymiga Client Like the fonts in #32 and #37, but the same changes to everything would still apply. Would also like to see the distressed debris eliminated from ASYLUM in #32. 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer ..just uploaded #50 with the changes made as per request :) 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer ..also #51 & #52 :) 12 years ago bobbymiga Client Really feeling #50! Can you still make the string just a teeny tiny bit longer and still keep some of that beautiful thickness change in the string, and have it wave just a tiny bit. We don't want it to look like sperm, but the string should make it seem like it's flying.Love the textured idea in #52. I'm not sure if it's the one that we would use, but thank you for trying and reading the brief!Let's move forward without the shadowing...Thanks! 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer Great feedback again, thank you, i will start on the new updates now wand will upload again for you soon :)ray 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer I just uploaded #72 , #74 & #75 with slight changes made to how the string is flowing :) 12 years ago bobbymiga Client Hey Ray!Thanks for these designs...A few things...#80 I am really feeling this design. I love the string and I don't want to see it's shape or design changed; however, I need the string even a bit longer... probably going up to where the shine mark starts on the current design. The balloon itself can also be enlarged probably about 20%. I understand that essentially the design will have to "zoom out" for this to happen. The title and slogan can probably also get a little bit larger.This is my favorite string design and also like the font. Our plan with this font for ASYLUM is to be able to fill it in with red whenever we would like to use the title without the balloon image.I'm going to bin the string possibilities and fonts that I'm not going to use, but keep this design as the number one spot as it is the front runner right now.Thanks again. 12 years ago bobbymiga Client Once you make those changes, I would also like to see a version where "get committed." is angled slightly.Thanks! 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer Hi again, thanks so much for your direction again, ill start on the changes now and will upload for you shortly :)ray 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer ..uploaded #108 & #115 :) 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer ..also #116 with a slightly thicker string length.. 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer ..also uploaded #121 as im not 100% sure that #108 & #115 have kept the right shape in the string.. 12 years ago bobbymiga Client #116 is really what I had seen in my head. We like the boldness and size of the title. Is it possible to see the "get committed." just slightly larger... like let's say that right now it is a size 10 font; maybe just make it 11 or 12. Also, I would like to see the balloon head a little bit larger.Thank you so much! love your work! 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer ..sure ill make the changes for you no problems, I'm just on way to office now, won't be too long :)ray. 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer ..sure ill make the changes for you no problems, I'm just on way to office now, won't be too long :)ray. 12 years ago bobbymiga Client Also just wanted to make sure that per the brief, you will be OK sending me a second version of the logo where the "get committed." changes to "getcommitted.org" . 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer ..yes that's fine, after all its your logo we need to get right :) 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer ..uploaded #122 with slightly enlarged balloon head also the 'get committed' slightly enlarged :) 12 years ago raymer Logo Designer ..entry #123 shown with the 'getcommitted.org' too :) If you would like to see any further changes just let me know, thank youray 12 years ago