Entry #15 has some interesting elements. I would really like to see gold used in the leaf or with the word Aspen. This is heading in the right streamlined direction. Other color combinations would be good to see.
Perhaps gold Aspen and leaf with either deep red or black? What if there was a line or hatch underline in deep red? That would be Gold Aspen and Gold leaf with black Financial and deep red line beneath or something along those lines? The combination of gold black and deep red is making sense. Your horizontal presentation and the subtle gold leaf also make sense. Thanks.
I like your work very much. I just went over the tournament with a designer friend and he suggested gntium book basic font. Can you try that to see how it would look?
Revision already done...entry #83 and #84 is using Gentium Book Basic Font. and dont worry with the quality.. its vector base, you can make it big or small like what you want without loosing the details...