I like the horizontal presentation but the leaf is not an Aspen leaf. I would like the gold leaf to be subtle perhaps underneath the name as if lying on the ground, small and gold. Could you try other color combinations with the font?
The design of the leaf has the effect of making it appear gold. #157 #159
For example the color design #158 is flat and is where the ink is applied to metallic gold color, and then the same ink is responsible for giving the effect of gold which is not the same current design ..
157 colors look good in white but I like the font in 159. Can you make that change and then show me the gold leaf, red aspen and gold financial in against white and against black? Can you then do the presentation with the same color combinations for 137. I'm down to picking which font and want the ability to print first against white and later against black. Please make it appear gold.
In addition to the last note can you try something simple? Gold leaf and all black letters? Can we try that for both fonts? If that works and is crisp I will probably go with gold leaf ( embossed or gold ink ) black letters for the card and then gold leaf ( embossed or gold ink ) white letters on a black background for the brochure and possibly the web. I'm looking to keep it elegant and clean. Once I see these and the previous note I'm hoping that will be it. I do like the leaf logo being slightly larger than the type.