Ashley Hodge FitnessLogo Design Contest

an abstract or letterform mark.

the first approach doesn't speak to my brand. Please do not use the current logo. I tried to make some adjustments in my brief but could not update it. after seeing some of the options coming in - i am more set on a corporate feel. less cartoon. more clean. i am open to seeing options without the tagline. i like that the logo is gender neutral - however I'd a logo that is more abstract with my name

this seems like feedback for a different design. can you be more specific on how you would like to see this modified to better fit your vision? this is easy to do in 1 color option - it is a distinctive font style to emphasize Fitness and classic font for name. with a simple highlight line.
Carol

Hello - I am looking for a more corporate feel
simple stamp
can be printed in one ink
read well in any size

please stay from warrior feel - too strong. stay away from military. stay away from using humans.
i prefer abstract but recognizable. i represent trust. I want a solid clean logo